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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. I'm sorry to see that it wasn't continued.
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the chapter i want to see what happend to yusuke and all.
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, nicely descriptive. I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops. I was hit #2! Anyway, I agree with not using the Japanese thing but then again I always slip. It's weird isn't it. Anyway, please do update soon =]
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool! I liked the way your plot didn't reveal everything until the end of the chapter. When I read that partner line, I thought of Kuronue, but Yusuke is fine nonetheless. ^^ Oh, and the spirit world is 'ReiKAI' not 'ReiKI', which is spirit energy...I can't use Japanese either or face extreme embarrassment. -____- Well is this a one shot? You should continue it! Update (hopefully)!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dons a voice like DeeDee from "Dexter's Laboratory"* OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH................................ This is really good so far...ME LIKEY!!! .........even if the pairing is gonna be Kurama/Yusuke (I'm an avid Kurama/Hiei), I still like it. It was very....I'm not sure what word to use. Poetic, perhaps. Decadent in description, but not so much that it got away from my comprehension. Elaborate, yet simple-- in a good way, mind you ^__^ I hope you update again REAL soon.