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by isabela

person Botan
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story. Your Keiko reminded me a lot of the way I write Keiko. (I spell it Kayko though) A slut. Anyway I hope to see more of this story. I'm completely baffled by who ends up with whom. So don't ruin. Keep writing. Later. Botan
person visitor008
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This one is getting better...
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON. ;)

visitor008
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked your fic , .update soon
PLEASE Kurama and Botan
person pam21
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is nice. Can't wait to see who ends up together.
I didn't think Kuwabara's a perv though. Didn't he assist his sister and Yukina in chapter 1?
Where did Koenma go? And I like Hiei... can you add more of them?

Update soon please!!!
person The Green Knight
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now you know damn well that Kuwabara isn't a damn pervert. Like the story though, it's just a pain to read how you wrote Kuwabara.
person redtatsu
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looking good! Can't wait to see where your going exactly with this.