rate_review Reviews

First off, I just wanted to say that I love the prologue to this story. Very nice on the explanation of Hiei's birth. With that said, I found that I couldn't really give any complaints over the story. I think it's good overall. I guess all I can really say is that I hope you will update it soon!

*Hugs* You're back! The chibi's are safely locked in their cage, don't worry. And I don't really have any more questions, nope, this chappie dispelled them all! Yeah, bapping little kids... they don't like that much. (I SWEAR i didn't hit that stupid bra-- I mean, little angel) And don't feel shitty about not updating- I'm worse. (I posted my story under a different name.. 'cause I'm just weird like that. You'll have to figure out which story tho. At least you know what's going on... I havn't the foggiest wht's going to happen next in mine ^~^) Also, now that I've actually written and posted a story... i will NEVER complain about it being short, EVER!!! Damnit, how long does it have to be in ms word in order to make it more than a page in aff??? The subjects of this review has, yet again, been lost. Isn't that right chibis? *looks over to chibi's cage, then reliezes it's open* Ohh... damnit..... RUUUUN!! WIIILD CHIBIS!!! *Hiding* i'll wait here... beware of the chibis!! And floppies. NEVER TRUST FLOPPIES!! I lost the entire doujinshi my friend scanned for my viewing pleasure due to a floppy T.T Cya!!

Indeed I am looking forward to the massacres. I love blood, gore, and death in fics as long as it isn't Hiei or Kurama being killed LOL Everyone else is pretty much fair game for me. I checked the story out on FF and I must say I was pleased. I can't wait to read the uncut chapters. Update soon please!

Floppy disks are useless to me.

Many apologies for not having reviewed this sooner. I just found this story today, and had not been aware of its existence prior. I really like it; I could picture the scenes playing in my head like a movie. Very good.

I've read a lot of fics where Hiei can cry black Hiruseki stones, so I see no reason why you can't use that in your story also. If that's what you want to do, go ahead with it.

I'm now interested concerning whatever relationship Hiei possessed with Yoko........ So I hope you update this again soon, so I can read and review again. ^__^

aww! poor hiei-kun!! :glomps: i really really like this fic, it brings a new depth into hiei's character since you don't get much in the anime. i love your characters too..wouldn't mind meeting a few of them...with hiei by my side of course..O.o i hope you keep going with this one, it's a change i think..keep up the wonderful work ^^

o_o People dont review? I think Ive only reviewed twice out of my life o_o;; Yeah.. that's sad.. --_-- I feel so horrible now. But dont quit your writing, because I'm sure tons of people enjoy it. I know I did. Others shouldnt determine whether or not you have to complete what you enjoy doing. But if you do need some motivation to contuine, finish it for the people who care neh? I'm one of them. n_n

Yeah, i'm one of those annoying reviewiers who comes back. Irksome, ain't it? *We see punchbag Baku, Sage and Shinai (if there were more, i forgot their names ) getting beat up by random chibi characters* Oh fear the chibis, for they will eat you alive. Oopssies, off subject, moving on. For the actual review-ish review: Tooo shooort... waaaa (yes i whine alot. Bite me. *Chibis look hungry* ACK!! NOT LITERALLY! Goddamn chibis.. and there it goes, WEE! Off the subject, traalaalaa..) Oh yeah, and just leave me to be curious... how long has this been going on? Not long, if he hasn't learned to stop crying yet, yet long enough to know what to expect. How was he captured? These questions probably don't matter in the long run, but i'm a curious little fox. Humor me? (This is about as close to a true review as i get, mwaahaa.) Umm... the chibi's are staring at me... they want an update and they still look hungry. I'll come back when there's an update, but til then... i fear the chibis.. *tosses chibis pocky, then runs and waits for a review at a safer distance. Chibis keep staring at story, munching on pocky*

I know what you mean about the reviews. I put up two chapters on my own story today and thus far I haven't gotten a review for the new addtions. Could be worse though I suppose, out of the reviews I have gotten no one has flamed me yet. Which is surprising since I'm up to 25 chapters so far and there hasn't been a lemon yet *snickers* Anyhow, onto my review. This was a good chapter, I'm just waiting for Hiei to grow stronger. Then watch the carnage that occurs when he slaughters everyone. Hehe, I'm not blood thirsty at all, honest :-D Please update soon, I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

Great first chapter, I look forward to reading more. Please update soon

I'm looking forward to seeing how and in which direction this fic is going to go. Please update because the prolouge is already in the eps[but very nicely written]. I'm looking forward to your AU storyline.