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for Shared Traumas

by YaoiGoddess

person Shala
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh poor Koenma, I know what's wrong, it' scalled 'morning sickness'! haha Enma DID give the unborn baby back to Koenma so that means he once again pregnant.

It's understandable that some people don't get that at first. We could forget that Koenma told Kuwabara that Sensui raped him ten years ago. That rape resulted in the young Kami getting pregnant. King Enma took the unborn away and Koenma never knew what happpened to his child. Well, Enma has returned the baby so that means that Koenma is pregnant at the same stage as he was when King Enma first took the baby.

Now Koenma gets to experience the symtoms of pregnancy, which begins with morning sickness. XD
person Alaskantiger
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter!!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!!!:)
person Phillepa
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Maybe now you'll start updating your other fics again. I want to read the sequel to unlikely lovers become unlikely fathers.
person Katzztar
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh good chapter. I like how Kazuma stayed behind to tend to Koenma.
I also liked how the guys were worried about Kazuma. Even Hiei although he shows in in typical manner= teasing.
person kira
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurry up and write more plz
person kyra
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHERE'S THE REST!!!! you can't just leave it there your going to make me scream and im a very patient person who never screams SO HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!!
KYRA*who is extremly frustrated now*
person angel
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is great. you just have to finish it
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So I liked your other work and decided to see what other fics you wrote. I came across this one and I am in love with it! Kuwabara imortal! I love it and him and Koenma is great! You are such an awsome writter and I'm so glad to see many decent Kuwabara stories, which you have made! I love reading stories you made with Kuwabara and this is no exception. I can't wait to read more of this story, please update soon!
person Kitkat
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Koenma/Kazuma!!! Finally someone decided they were worthy a try.
The enviroment is something I thought myself but I would never get to write it, though i've never thought
about having a romance in my fic, specially not with koenma.
I'm glad you did and you're doing great in this story. The imortality is a really nice touch.
I'll stay tuned for the next chapters. Kitkat
person She-wolf
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that great. Having Kuwabara as a demi-god. But I want to know if you have a other fic with Kuwabara as demi-god. Ya know, have has friends do hurt in some that he goes off to train to be come stronger only to find out he is the egyptian cat goddess Bast ,son. But could you make it a Kurama/Kuwabara one? I really like that. What I saying is that could you make a fic were Kuwabara get hurts by everyone he loves, finds out he the son of Bast and later pairs up with Kurama. PLease just think about it.