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for Bitter Sweetness

by yukari

person SerenaJr.
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hay......Why u stop............keep going and update already.....Sheeeesh. I love it.
person Anon
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
make more chapters i have been waiting a while and the storie is very good!!!!
person SAMANTHA
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY THIS STORY IS SO GOOD GET THE FUCKIN SECOND CHAPTER OUT ALREADY OKAY I LOVE THIS STORY BECAUSE THIS GOTH CHICK REMINDS ME OF ME LOL AND YES IM GOTHIC LOVE THE MUSIC LOVE THE CLOTHS WELL UHHHHHHHHHH HOPE YOU GET THE SECOND CHAPTER OUT SOON BYEBYE
person Kitty
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love the start of you story so far. the personality of Yukari is so perfect! please update soon!!!!
person blackrosejem
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this story is good keep it up and write more to it alright i like this story!!!!!!!
person dunken
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a good start. i'm interested in reading some more but that means you have to post more. :) i belive that is the school he goes to but i think its often spelledfereferently. i wouldn't worry about it too much. anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!