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for Controlling the Fire

by ashimoto

person emory
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'm with Raven Black that story kicked ass. i'm looking forward to an update.
person Raven Black
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was Kick Ass!!!!!!! I can't wait to read more of it! have fun writing more of it.

egarly antisipating your next chapter

chass
person Nekohime
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ummm.... you must continue with this story immediately!.. It'e pure genious.. and I have the strange suspicion you've hypnotized a person before... cause now I'm desperately hooked to your story... please update soon... and though I do hate cliff hangers they sure do highten the curiosity ne?. go to bed.. rest.. come back.. write... soon ... please
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, I hope you update soon, Bye.
person just too in love with yaoi
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooo please yes hurry up and finish the story
person Yamistar
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was very nice! I really think you have something going here. PLease continue! I like it! ^.^
person phoenix
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I dun care if you strangle yourself or not just finish the bloody fic!!!!!!
person clowangel
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was great!! ^^ I want more! Muahahahaa!! Hiei was hypnotized! *giggles*
person ko-krama
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HIIIII! This story was fuggin awesome o_0 ... ^_^ ! Oh God, I can't wait for more!
person Shun208
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like a lot! write MORE! I'll be waiting for your UPDATE!!!! I love it!