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by mocha

person AnnaJaganshi
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great story mocha! Were you going to put all the senses up, or was it just these two? You should do them all, they're really good stories, and they'd be really great! Keep it up!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Confusing, but enjoyable, just the same!!! I enjoyed the descriptions, and you portrayed Hiei's character well -- keep up the good work!!! I look forward to the "next instalment"!!! Ja ne!!!
person Sai
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh! that was such a good story! are there more chapters or will it stop there? i hope u continue.
person Yami Yue
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You totally lost me, but still an interesting chapter. I hope you'll update with the explanation soon.
person phoenix
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is abit confusing........................i dun get it wen is it placed?
person Everqueen
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you have got to update. That is so twisted, I love it. Keep going.