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for Shattered Freedom

by sisko66002

person Nina
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is reatakitaking on a life of its own. I'm interested to find out more about where the sisters are from. And how Kurama is going to rescue Hiei and Yusuke. This is getting really good. Take your time with the next chapter so it comes out the way you want. I'll look forward to it.
person Nina
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good. Please keep going.
person Nina
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was very good. It filled in some of the questions I had. I'm very interested to see how the rest falls into place. Keep going.
person Nina
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see the next few chapters to see where you are taking this. Because right now I'm confused. I think you need to give alot more information tying the storyline together a bit more. The chapter was way too short which left too many questions like "huh". But you have sparked my curiousity. So give us a few more longer chapters that will set up the story a little more clearly. It could very possibly end up being very entertaining. Plus, I can't believe you killed off Koga. That was very, very, nau naughty. Well good luck. I'll look forward to seeing where this stoyline goes. (PS: THIS REVIEW IS NOT A FLAME, SO PLEASE DO NOT TAKE IT AS SUCH)