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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am liking this one so far!! Please update soon! I would appreciate some Hiei/Vegeta action if possible. I've had that challenge up for a while now, but nobody seems to be taking it. :o(
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful i love the changes you made to the story.. it seems to flow better
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter i can't wait to see how yusuke turn goes.
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well written and definently one of my favorites, but I've never seen DragonballZ so I don't know whoo all the other peoples are... oh well. Are Arianna and Ariel anime characters or Original Characters?
Keep up the good work!
Serenity
Keep up the good work!
Serenity
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter even though the lemon seemed a little rushed.
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter we get to see that gohan and trunks don't really like the arragnments but they can't do nothing about it.
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I just read every single chapter! I love it! Every well written! I enjoyed reading it. One question, though, that has been bugging me. How did Kuwabara die? I would think that would be one thing Yusuke would remember and that would as so make him sad. That's the only thing I want to know. It is very good, I love it, and please continue!
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great chapter. I'm interested to find out more about what happens with this Blue Moon thing. I know Ariana has to sleep with them before that and I wonder how Yusuke is going to respond to it all. I'd love to see some Yusuke/Hiei loving too. ^_~
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo glad to see you're back. Great chappie. I'm ready for some lemons ^_~ Thanks for the email!
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alright i get cookies*eats all cookies while talking with food in mouth.* anyway im just so glad that you could update because this story is really good. i also can't wait for the lemon between yusuke and hiei.