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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cannot believe you had stopped right there. O_O I was waiting for a lemon and BOOM! .... the end. haha.. But beautifully written one-shot. If only you had continued for a few more paragraphs, I would be happier. XD
Still, you must find it strange for a review to pop up now since this fanfic is somewhere at the end. :P I've been spending hours looking for a good HK fic and I found yours. ^^ So yeah.. Heh. :) I only see one YYH fanfic you've written though. :( It'd be great if you could write more.
- Clow Angel
Still, you must find it strange for a review to pop up now since this fanfic is somewhere at the end. :P I've been spending hours looking for a good HK fic and I found yours. ^^ So yeah.. Heh. :) I only see one YYH fanfic you've written though. :( It'd be great if you could write more.
- Clow Angel
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was an... interesting place to stop. But it was a good story, you should add to it. Keep up the great writing!
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A. the beging of the fic makes no sence when compared to the end. B. The fic just STOPS. and C. I don't think Hiei would rape Kurama if he was stariting to love him (lust after him maybe, but not love) But still please write more, I want to no where your going with this.
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story and all. But, that isn't really a lemon. You should add more chapters or something.
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so great! No I're tre their relationship isn't all lovey-dovey, and you put a great spin on that. Great job! Can't wait to read more of your fics.
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I really liked the part where you had both Hiei and Kurama thinking the same things; about not trusting each other, and wanting more but not knowing how to go about it. I also liked your disclaimer. It made me think about something I've always believed would happen if anyone asked H&K whether or not they were gay. I think Kurama would giggle, raise his hand to his mouth, and turn away without a word, and Hiei would snort and say, "I can't believe you brought me here just to ask me that," then blur away.
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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I completely agree with that version of their relationship. The only suggestion I have is that you edit/proof read this fic...and write a sequel.
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just loved this. What wonderful insight you have into the emotions and feelings of Kurama and Hiei. I don't know what you could have done or added to make this story any better. Excellent job. You're a very, very talented writer.
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really great take on kurama - hiei =) i could definetly see it happening that way
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really cool!!