The essence of smell.

Chapter 1: Long for 1/2completion?

This is my first story so please review and tell me how it is and/or how to make this and future stories better.

It was a hard day. Botan was tired. She just helped Yusuke complete a so-called minor mission. A gigantic muck monster shouldn’t be much of a problem Koenma says. Defeating him wasn’t a problem. It was tolerating that smell. It was near unbearable just being ten feet near that thing let alone being inside it. If Botan wasn’t already dead she’d have died then.
*And where was my boy toy bitch Yusuke then!*
Botan just needed to shower off the muck and some of the stench that came with it. Hot bath after that would help to cure everything else. Well almost everything else. She was hot with need. Yusuke hadn’t fucked her in months. He was the third best at fucking but hell it was still good. If only Keiko wasn’t like a sister to her she’d go over there and fuck him just as she is.
Botan checked the water pressure under the hot shower. With the muck gone her hands reached done to her clit. She began rubbing it in circles with her index finger. Her middle finger went into her hot wet pussy. She made a small whimper. Another finger entered causing her to whimper more.
*This isn’t satisfying enough. I’d have more fun with Kuwabara.*, Botan thought.
She raised her other hand and summoned her oar. The temperature of the water went to warm and she sat on the oar. The oar levitated, her legs spread apart and still fingering herself, placed Botan’s pussy right under the nasal, the water falling heavily into her pussy making it and her overflow.
She was reaching climax when she felt a medium sized hand grab the hand fingering her pussy. Another hand pulled her from under the water. “If you wanted some fun you should have just called Bo.” The hand went around her waist and turned her around on the oar. “Hiei we haven’t spoken in months. Besides you were having so much fun with Karama I thought the only time you remembered me were the few assignments Yusuke had that involves you.”
“You talk too much and hardly think when it’s needed like now.” Hiei spread her legs apart then began eating her away. Botan let out a soft whimper. Hiei played with the clitoris. Teasing it until it snapped back in place when he pushed with his tongue. Hiei slipped his tongue into her causing a variety of sensations to run through Botan.
He lifted her off of the oar and made her face the wall. Botan’s legs spread apart. She turned her head around, “You sure you have the height for this position.” Humor in her voice.
“Hmph”, Hiei rammed his ten inch cock into her making her scream out. He grabbed her hair with one and lifted her left leg with the other. Like a madman Hiei kept ramming into her. “Hiei” panted Botan.
Hiei stopped. Using her hair Hiei pulled Botan’s head back and whispered in her ear,“ I want you to scream my name. Panting isn’t worth shit.” Using her hair he turned Botan around with such speed, she was on all four and Hiei’s leg over her in an instant. Hiei rammed into her slowly at first. After a few minutes he was moving like a steam engine. “HIEI! HIEI!” was all Botan could scream before she climaxed, Hiei following in her a minute later.
Two hours and two fucks in the tub later.

“So what brings you here? Other than having a good fuck.” Botan asked while getting dressed.
“Koenma asked me to call you for him. He needs to speak with us in the spirit world in an hour. Your to take Yusuke with you.”
“ Take Yusuke with me, that’s not normal. Usually Koenma just comes to the human world if he wants to talk in person.” Botan pondered.