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Eternal Darkness

By: Ravenx
folder Yuyu Hakusho › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 19
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Coming Clean

Thnx to my reviewers:
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General A/N: I don’t own the characters or show. I’m bad at editing, if I do it at all, so there will most likely be errors. I’m updating chapter by chapter so I’m not sure how often I’ll update, but I’ll try to make it soon. And lastly this story is told by Hiei’s POV.

Eternal Darkness
Part 8: Coming Clean

Ravenx


The first thing I see when I open my eyes is red. For a moment I don’t know where I am, but then it all comes back to me. I still can’t believe that last night I made love to this beautiful fox in front of me.

We are still in the same position that we fell asleep in, my hands resting on his flat stomach. I lean forward just an inch so that I can lay a small kiss on the back of his head. He moans and snuggles up against me more.

I’m so lucky to have someone like him. I told him of my true nature and he still wanted to be with me. He understands me better than any one in the world ever could. When I tell him I want him as my life mate, I want to make it special. Something that he will remember forever, because I’m no longer afraid that he will reject me.

I’m interrupted from my thoughts as he turns in my arms. I come face to face with bright emeralds and a smile.

“Morning Hiei.” He blushes slightly as he brings his head to rest under my chin.

“Morning, tenshi (1).” I rub my hand up and down his side.

“Are we going to tell the others today?”

“Yeah, if we can get a hold of them.” He pulls back from my neck.

“I forgot. Yusuke asked me to come and train with him and Kuwabara today. We can tell them then.”

“Sounds good.” He leans in and kisses me. Man I love those lips. So soft and perfect. He finally pulls back so that we can both breath.

“I’m sticky. I’m going to take a shower.” One more kiss and he gets out of bed, heads toward the door which allows me to get a great view of the rounded bottom. I just watch him until he glances over his shoulder and speaks seductively.

“You want to join me?” How could I ever say no to that?

I practically jump out of bed and run after him to the bathroom across the hall. He just giggles as he tests the water.

“Will you get some towels out of that cabinet for us?”

I open the cabinet and pull out two large white towels and a wash cloth. He motions toward the closed lid of the toilet and I place the towels there while I watch him enter the shower. As the water wets his red hair I step in behind him.

I watch the paths the water takes down his body as it reaches the slight roundness of his rear end. I reach down and grab a bottle that smells like fruit then pick up the wash cloth.

I start to wash his back. He just moans. I slide the cloth over his arms and to his slick chest where it travels downward. But I completely ignore his awakening arousal and bend to travel down his legs. Moving up the back of his legs to that perfect behind I let the cloth run over it.

After making sure he is completely washed I step back in the small shower and wait for him to rinse. He. He’s out from under the water in a matter of seconds and turning to look at me. He closes the small space between us and bends to take my lips.

The kiss is quis hes he pulls back and places some more of the fruit smelling stuff on the cloth. He kisses my nose before he moves the cloth over my shoulders and down my chest and arms. I wish it were him, his skin, touching me not this stupid cloth.

We switch places, so that I’m closer to the water, as he washes my back. As I look over my shoulder I see him on his knees. Man that is a gorgeous sight. He lets the cloth glide over my bottom and legs, front and back.

I feel the cloth leave my skin and his hand on my backside gently pushing me forward under the fall of water. As the last of the soap washes off my body I feel warm hands on my hips. Glancing behind me I find him still on his knees.

I turn as his arms wrap around my waist and pull me closer. Finding his lips I take them passionately. I bring my hands up to pull his wet hair behind him to run down his slick back.

One of his arms leave my waist and the hand goes down to my erection.

“Someone likes showers.” He giggles.

I just smirk before kissing him again. His hand begins to pump up and down on my erection. He is driving me crazy! I have got to have him. I pull him up by the arms and turn him around, I miss his hand but I know something much better will be wrapped around my erection soon.

I grab the bottle that smells of fruit and coat my hand with some of the liquid. I nip his shoulder blade before finding his entrance with one of my coated fingers. He moans as he bucks back.

I find myself in the same state of mind as last night. I can’t wait to be inside of him and quickly but gently work two more fingers inside of him. He doesn’t seem to mind much because he’s pushing back against my invading fingers and starts to beg.

“Please…Hiei…I need you now.” I find that love the way he begs.

I remove my fingers and find that I we have a problem. I hate my height! He’s just a little too tall for me to reach my desired destination. So I grab his hips and give him a little pull, hoping he knows what I mean.

Lucky for me, he knows me well and spoken communication is not needed. He braces his hands on the wall and bends his knees, which brings him just where I need him.

I enter slowly, not wanting to hurt him even after the stretching. He is still so tight and warm. I place my hands on his hips and start a gentle thrust motion. But with his moaning and the tightness around my arousal I can’t keep the pace slow for long.

I see one of his hands move from the wall and watch it as it disappears to his front. By the sounds he starts to make I can only guess where that hand went.

The knowledge of my sweet innocent fox stroking his self drives me wild with need and I start pumping in and out of him with vigor.

“Hiei…n..not go..going to la..last much longer.”

That’s fine with me because I’m not either. I angle my thrust to hit against that spot deep within him that makes him scream out loud. Only a couple of hits and he gets tighter around my erection and I know that he is cumming. I can’t help but follow him.

I grunt out his name as I spill my seed deep inside of him. I hold on to him for a moment before pulling out of him and letting him stand up. I know his legs must be killing him from being in that odd position.

He turns and kisses me again before going back under the water for a moment. Finally he turns it off and steps out. I soon do the same thing and watch him start to dry off.

As he moves to look at me he chuckles. “Hiei, dry off before you soak the floor.” I quickly grab the other towel and do as he says. Funny how love can make me take orders. But I would do anything he asks.

As soon as we are completely dry I follow him across the hall to his room where he begins looking in his closet for some cloths. I search the room and find my pants and tank top on the floor in the corner.

After I dress I look up to find him brushing his hair. He has chosen to wear a dark pair of blue jeans and a green shirt.

“How are you going to tell them Hiei?” Good question.

“I don’t know. I guess I’ll just come out and tell them like I told you.”

“Well, once you explain to them exactly what is going on I think they will be understanding.” I hope he is right. But as long as I have him I don’t really care.

“Hn.”

He sits his brush down and looks at me. There’s that giggle again.

“How does your hair stay up like that after you’ve been in the shower?” I just shrug my shoulders, which gets me a smile and a kiss on the nose. “Come on. Lets get going before they think I’m not coming.”

TBC
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1) tenshi - angel

Don’t ask me how, but this idea came to me while I was giving my dog a bath. I thought my great readers (especially the reviewers!) deserved another lemon so I started writing on it immediately!! Hope you like.

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Also, if any readers are Gundam Wing fans I just uploaded a story I thought I lost. It's called The Room. Check it out and don't forget to review it.

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