Captured!

Just so I can keep track of my wonderful reviews. :o)
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thoth_moon
I've never read a fanfic in script form before. But it's not intolerable; I suppose I can stand it.
Interesting so far. Now I'm wondering who the "employee" they want back may be. Update soon?
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mhmartini
You know, I thought the script format would be a distraction, but I adapted to it rather quickly, and more inportantly, the content of your story made me want to keep reading until I adapted. I still prefer non-script, but it does not detract from your story. The story itself has me hooked. I'm a sucker for angst anyway, and you've really got me waiting for more. You've worked in some elements I have not seen used before, like the origin of Hiei's starburst and some of the drugs and plants. I really like that creativity and you've woven your tale quite believably. You're really expanding on the canon facts and the individual character's personalities in a way that is very enjoyable to read.
I look forward to reading more.
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solitare1
Great story so far. I didn't think I would like script reading but it really works good here. Be looking forward to more.
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thoth_moon
Oh man, I go away for the weekend and I come back and you've updated ten-fold! XD You know what? I don't even really notice that it's in script form anymore. And your use of the first letter of a curse word followed by however many dashes is actually a practice that one will find in many books written prior to I believe this most recent past century, so that doesn't distract me either.
And oh--dark, dark, drugs, brooding, dark, sex, DARK! Fantastic! This story itself is like a drug, and you already have *two* sequels, is it, written? Rest assured I'll stick around; I hope you update soon.
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thoth_moon
Oh, I do love these speedy updates! But then, you said you already had it written out, didn't you? That would make sense, then.
So Hiei's son has now been impregnated by Kuwabara? I suppose that in a scenario away from this Kuwabara would be as good as dead, but in *this* scenario, this dark dark scenario (and believe me, I do like dark)--they're going to have to stick together, won't they? I've been noticing a strain making its presence known, sometimes moreso than others, that I don't think will be beneficial to their getting out of the situation. Hm....
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thoth_moon
Cool, so Sabaktu is gaining new dimension and Kuwabara's, uh, partially lucid. Hiei just got hit with that Hot Juice, didn't he? And it appears that inside this compound there's at least some partially reluctant parties. Next scene should prove *quite* interesting (not that any of these so far have not been).
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thoth_moon
We're both productive today, no?
Yes, I was waiting for it, and yes, it was *good*. But man, the negativity going on in these cells--I wonder, *will* Koenma show? *shrugs* At least they're all negative together, now if only they could put that unity to more productive means...
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BlueUtopiah
You know, the script format threw me but after a chapter I didn't notice it at all. I really like this. I'm always one for Reikai Tantei torture, and you're dishing it out like crazy. I love Hiei's slutboy backstory, and the way you incorprated the drugs as a means of controlling him. I'm really worried though, because Hiei isn't usually one to give up so easily and he seems resigned at this point.
Kurama's nicely in character, as is Yusuke, and the collars, as well as the explanation for Hiei's starburst, and the use of his son is very creative. I'm looking forward to more.
Oh and BTW, the non-cursing thing is hilarious, I have a mouth like a truck driver so I guess there has to be someone out there to balance me out!
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kerryann
All I can say is "wow" to this story as it is so far.I'm sorry I have not reviewed before now having found this somewhere in a middle chapter.Is Hiei's son going to help in their release?Writting in this form in kind of fun to read.Its hard to believe that all 3 would just take whats being dished out to them and I can't wait to see what Koenma has up his sleeve to get them out of this.Its amazing on how fast you update as well and greedly I hope I don't have to wait long for the next update.
Your awsome........great job
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mhmartini
You're really flying with these updates. And I love it! I love seeing this story unfold before me. I feel so bad for Sabie, though. Well, I fell bad for all the guys (as I love watching them suffer) but the boy really had no chance. I love that you've given Hiei a paternal side; I've really always seen him as having that secret parental instinct hidden deep under the gruff exterior.
I can't wait to see how Kurama reacts to what's about to come. I know he said he's a big boy, but he was shaking the first time they got close and I can totally see him falling apart at some point afterwards. After all, he's an old fox and has never had a litter; I can only conclude he has been careful not to. What a change awaits him. (And I just like it when he suffers - he's my favorite.) Keep up the great work and I'll be sure to keep reading!!
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solitare1
I am really loving this story!! I also love how fast and how much you update. I have you saved into my favs. so I can check back often.
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thoth_moon
Look, your following is growing!
Kurama still seems resigned-ish, Kuwabara's still weak and delusional ... but at least Koenma has some clue now. I wonder if this little "maternity ward" situation will give Hiei and Sabaktu the opportunity to improve on their "quality time." Perhaps they could conspire or something ^__^ Well, looking forward to what you have planned next.
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kerryann
Now what?Wow,poor Kewa well at least he isn't really there mentally.You write so well I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next.I'm sooo happy that its already written out and hope that life is kind to you (not just for this story).I can't wait for the sequels.
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BlueUtopiah
I was actually wondering if you were going to have Hiei and his son as a pairing in this, and it looks like you are, which makes this fic even more wonderfully perverse. It's amazing how brutal you can make this without getting into long winded harsh description. I like that. I'm glad Yusuke and Kurama finally hooked up, and I liked how you made their coupling more intimate and less primal than Yusuke and Hiei's. I also like that they are trying many times. I'm sure Kurama doesn't have any complaints. :D
Again, your updating is amazing. I could learn a lesson from you (I'm one of the bad people that takes forever to update).
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thoth_moon
I was dreading something like that happening since early on in the story--but while you might write it and I might read it, as a most disturbing scene that is probably integral to a most disturbed plot-line, we do not endorse such a thing occurring in a real-life scenario (and as I said before, it was a distubring scene; they were made to do it). But it's done; I hope they won't have to do it again...
And giving Hiei that one chance in that one situation--well, that's just a sadistic cherry on an oh-so-wrong sundae. Evil dessert, really *shakes head*
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solitare1
Poor Kurama has waited so long and still nadda. Hiei and Kuwa are getting more than him and hes cuter.(smile) I don't know about anyone else but if a story is good it can't be too long. And this story is that good.
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thoth_moon
Sorry if my last review was that ambiguous--what I meant to convey in it was though I know you and I both disapprove of such activity in reality, but this was fiction--and it was portrayed as repulsive in that as well. I understand that. Not upset--well, I'm sure *they* were upset, but you know what I mean(?)
I actually wasn't expecting Satjiyu to top Yusuke--stupid that the thought didn't cross my mind, considering the fic. I guess because for so long there Yusuke was being used as the stud *shrugs* But I must remember: hold no reservations where this is concerned, because you might pull something! Ha-ha, but well... at least they're all out of the dungeon, though Hiei and Sabaktu might not be in an improved situation. At least Koenma's clues are adding up, um, sort of.
So something in one of your A/N's--is one of the sequals about them recovering from the events in this story? (Damn I hope so; three stories of Satjiyu's torture would be sadistic!)
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thoth_moon
I guess I saw Kuwabara's death coming. But if he still hasn't been processed, maybe Yusuke can still speak with him.
Yes, you do take that couple of days off--I'm away from my room on the weekends, and I'd hate it if I missed the sequal's debut! It ends just like that, so I'll be quite interested to see how things develop in "The Aftermath"!
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mhmartini
Did you erase your reviews? I know you added them in the 39th chapter, but they would have stayed right there for you. Well, whatever you please. Onto the actual review part:
I really enjoyed this story. The ending was in line with the rest of the story. I'm glad the cavalry got its act together in time to avoid even worse humiliations for our boys. But you've left a big, old cliffhanger at the end of the story! there is so much just hanging out there right now without closure! I'm dying to start reading the sequel. And while I loved your quick updates, you've now spoiled your readers and made us crave them even more! I can't wait to see what happens in the next installment(s).
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I'll leave any further reviews there. I just did this so I can keep track of how many "new" reviews I get on the story, now that it is completed. I didn't remove them to offend anyone! In facct, I put them here to show my recognition and appreciation.

If you read my story and you like, please review. :o)