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By: Darkestfairyqueen
folder Yuyu Hakusho › General
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 12
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Disclaimer: I do not own YuYu Hakusho, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Chapter 2

Chapter Two



I awoke to having my throat sore. Five sets of eyes were in my view. I try to talk. Meaningless squeaks emerge. I am ashamed of my weakness.



“Is your name Elfleda?” Open. Close. Open. “Elfleda you were convicted on the charge of attempted assassination of the ruler Emna… Is this true?” Open. Close. Open. “Then you admit to being an assassin?” Open close open close open. “You mean to say you believe yourself to be innocent?” Open close open close open. “So you are guilty.” Open close open close open. “What are you trying to say?”



“I believe to say that she doesn’t believe she is innocent that she knows she is innocent. Is that correct Elfleda?” the man with the red hair and green eyes smiled at me. Open close open.



“When was Elfleda put in jail?” asked the man with black hair that was slicked back.



“It seems like she was charged with this crime…” he looked through the paper and began to sweat and become nervous. “400 years ago.”



“WHAT?” the entire group stared at him. “FOUR HUNDRED YEARS?!”



“Koemna WHEN was she supposed to be released?” Asked the man with orange hair. The man known as Koemna began to look more nervous if that was possible flipping through pages.



“Umm… 50 more years she has left.”



“What? Fifty years from now!” stated the man with orange hair.



“Did she have a trial?” asked the man with red hair.



“Well my father was... well… the judge and the jury.”



“So she was unfairly judged.” The man with slicked back black hair. I tried to lift my head.



“K…Ko…Koem…na…” My throat was still sore and my voice didn’t sound like my own. It was weak and scratchy. He walked over to me. I kept my hand raised. I placed all my strength into that arm. Saving it for this one moment. I punched him as hard as I could. Even though it was just enough to make him stagger and fall. “For...your…dad.” Using all my strength to do that allowed me to slip back into darkness.



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Look i know my chapters are really really short. but i am just trying to get them up while juggeling job searching, school, family, and relationships... Please forgive me.. i am also trying to work on the other stories that i have... not coming out to well... please R&R
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