The Vacation (yeah right)
folder
Yuyu Hakusho › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
12
Views:
3,484
Reviews:
34
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Category:
Yuyu Hakusho › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
12
Views:
3,484
Reviews:
34
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own YuYu Hakusho, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
The Bus...
Yeah, Im not gonna be able to update this very often... But please review you guys!
I want to know what you all think!!!
The next day...
The bus pulls up. It's big like any normal tour bus, Including bunk beds, two long couches along the wall and a fold out table and plusy chairs. No Tv, though. (Koenma is sort of cheap).
-----------------------------BUS RIDE, DAY ONE-------------------------------------
Hiei immediatly sat at one of the couches, looking out the window. Kurama hoists himself onto the top bunk, and got out a book a little thicker than a complete dictionary/thesaurus and started reading. Yusuke plops on the other couch and Kuwabara sets his travelers bag on the table and then he sit down at one of the chairs. Kuwabara's cat, Eikichi, pokes it's head out of the bag.
The cat looks around and then went to investigate what Kurama was doing. It lays it's head in the crease at his bent elbow, licks him once and falls into a deep sleep. Kurama smiles.
Kuwabara pulls out his gameboy after finding the others boring. Of course he turns the music up full blast, what game would be complete without it? Hiei gives Kuwabara an irritated look. Kuwabara doesnt notice and yells at his 'stupid' gameboy for being 'a shitty piece of junk'.
Yusuke smiles, "Losing again, kuwabara?"
"Shove it, Yusuke, grumble, grumble."
A few minutes later the music changes to more upbeat as Kuwabara enters the final Boss battle.
"Hell yes! Im gonna beat this shitface!!!"
Hiei glares at Kuwabara.
A few minutes later....
"Motherfucker!!"
Yusuke smiles in amusement. "Losing?"
"No, dammit, I won, God, what do you think?!"
Hiei: Thats getting really annoying.
Kuwabara: Like I care what you think, shut up, shrimp!!
Hiei: I will break that infernal machine.
Yusuke: Calm down, you two.
"YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Yusuke raises his eyebrows. "What's up, Kuwabara?"
"I won!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Great!"
After that Kuwabara got very bored again.
He sits next to Hiei.
"Hey, shrimp."
(glare)
Kuwabara pokes him, hardish.
(glare)
(poke)
Hiei: do you want to die?
"Id like to see you try, you probably couldnt kill a fly."
"Oh, really?"
Yusuke intervines. "Stop it before someone gets hurt, namely you, Kuwabara."
(Kuwabara pokes Hiei again)
Hiei: That's it!!!! Get out!
Kuwabara: What?
Hiei: Get out of my territory!
He takes a piece of chalk and draws a line around the couch and table next to it.
"Anyone who crosses this line dies."
Kuwabara looks at the line, then jumps across it.
Hiei instantly attacks him. His hands go around Kuwabara's neck, choking him.
"Argh! Get this shrimp off me!!!"
Yusuke reaches over the line, prys Hiei off of Kuwabara and pulls Kuwabara back.
"Kuwabara, maybe for once you should listen to Hiei. Im not gonna save you again."
"Grr, fine."
The next few hours passed very uneventfully.
"Im hungry!!" Kuwabara yells up to the ogre driving the bus.
"Fine, fine. We're in a town right now, where do you want to stop?"
Kuwabara: McDonalds!!!
Kurama: SubWay.
Yusuke: Wendy's
Yusuke: Hiei, what do you pick?
Hiei looks up from the window. "Hmm?"
"What do you want to eat?"
Hiei observes them. "Pizza Hut."
Yusuke: Yeah, I could go for some pizza, I change my vote.
Kuwabara: Oh, come on, McDonalds is way better!!
Kurama: I happen to agree with Hiei. If we must have something with no nutritional value, pizza is the best.
Kuwabara: Fine, whatever.
Driver: We're here. Eat in or Carry out?
Yusuke: Let's eat in.
Kuwabara: Yeah, it's always more fun to eat in.
Driver: Okay.
They all leave the bus. Except Hiei. Yusuke stops at the door and looks at him.
"Why aren't you coming Hiei?"
"Im not hungry."
"Hmm, but we came where you wanted."
Hiei shrugs.
"Fine, but whats your favorite kind, Ill save some for you."
Hiei looks at Yusuke, wondering why he's being so nice.
"Pepperoni"
"Okay."
He leaves. While they are all inside, a large 5 story tall demon attacks. Hiei runs out to attack it.
I know the beginning isnt very interesting, but it'll get better, I promise.
Thanks for sticking with it this long.
Please review if you got any suggestions!!!!
Fixing dialouge.
I want to know what you all think!!!
The next day...
The bus pulls up. It's big like any normal tour bus, Including bunk beds, two long couches along the wall and a fold out table and plusy chairs. No Tv, though. (Koenma is sort of cheap).
-----------------------------BUS RIDE, DAY ONE-------------------------------------
Hiei immediatly sat at one of the couches, looking out the window. Kurama hoists himself onto the top bunk, and got out a book a little thicker than a complete dictionary/thesaurus and started reading. Yusuke plops on the other couch and Kuwabara sets his travelers bag on the table and then he sit down at one of the chairs. Kuwabara's cat, Eikichi, pokes it's head out of the bag.
The cat looks around and then went to investigate what Kurama was doing. It lays it's head in the crease at his bent elbow, licks him once and falls into a deep sleep. Kurama smiles.
Kuwabara pulls out his gameboy after finding the others boring. Of course he turns the music up full blast, what game would be complete without it? Hiei gives Kuwabara an irritated look. Kuwabara doesnt notice and yells at his 'stupid' gameboy for being 'a shitty piece of junk'.
Yusuke smiles, "Losing again, kuwabara?"
"Shove it, Yusuke, grumble, grumble."
A few minutes later the music changes to more upbeat as Kuwabara enters the final Boss battle.
"Hell yes! Im gonna beat this shitface!!!"
Hiei glares at Kuwabara.
A few minutes later....
"Motherfucker!!"
Yusuke smiles in amusement. "Losing?"
"No, dammit, I won, God, what do you think?!"
Hiei: Thats getting really annoying.
Kuwabara: Like I care what you think, shut up, shrimp!!
Hiei: I will break that infernal machine.
Yusuke: Calm down, you two.
"YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Yusuke raises his eyebrows. "What's up, Kuwabara?"
"I won!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Great!"
After that Kuwabara got very bored again.
He sits next to Hiei.
"Hey, shrimp."
(glare)
Kuwabara pokes him, hardish.
(glare)
(poke)
Hiei: do you want to die?
"Id like to see you try, you probably couldnt kill a fly."
"Oh, really?"
Yusuke intervines. "Stop it before someone gets hurt, namely you, Kuwabara."
(Kuwabara pokes Hiei again)
Hiei: That's it!!!! Get out!
Kuwabara: What?
Hiei: Get out of my territory!
He takes a piece of chalk and draws a line around the couch and table next to it.
"Anyone who crosses this line dies."
Kuwabara looks at the line, then jumps across it.
Hiei instantly attacks him. His hands go around Kuwabara's neck, choking him.
"Argh! Get this shrimp off me!!!"
Yusuke reaches over the line, prys Hiei off of Kuwabara and pulls Kuwabara back.
"Kuwabara, maybe for once you should listen to Hiei. Im not gonna save you again."
"Grr, fine."
The next few hours passed very uneventfully.
"Im hungry!!" Kuwabara yells up to the ogre driving the bus.
"Fine, fine. We're in a town right now, where do you want to stop?"
Kuwabara: McDonalds!!!
Kurama: SubWay.
Yusuke: Wendy's
Yusuke: Hiei, what do you pick?
Hiei looks up from the window. "Hmm?"
"What do you want to eat?"
Hiei observes them. "Pizza Hut."
Yusuke: Yeah, I could go for some pizza, I change my vote.
Kuwabara: Oh, come on, McDonalds is way better!!
Kurama: I happen to agree with Hiei. If we must have something with no nutritional value, pizza is the best.
Kuwabara: Fine, whatever.
Driver: We're here. Eat in or Carry out?
Yusuke: Let's eat in.
Kuwabara: Yeah, it's always more fun to eat in.
Driver: Okay.
They all leave the bus. Except Hiei. Yusuke stops at the door and looks at him.
"Why aren't you coming Hiei?"
"Im not hungry."
"Hmm, but we came where you wanted."
Hiei shrugs.
"Fine, but whats your favorite kind, Ill save some for you."
Hiei looks at Yusuke, wondering why he's being so nice.
"Pepperoni"
"Okay."
He leaves. While they are all inside, a large 5 story tall demon attacks. Hiei runs out to attack it.
I know the beginning isnt very interesting, but it'll get better, I promise.
Thanks for sticking with it this long.
Please review if you got any suggestions!!!!
Fixing dialouge.