Alpha

Alright! Wow thanks for all the awesome feedback! And in such a short time space!

First of all, to clarify…when I said I could end the story in two chapters I was being facetious. Also let me point out that I’m not mad/hurt/offended by Tanya’s review. It merely made me think, and so I put it to all of you…etc…

I’ve got a game-plan. Most of you seem to like the way things are going. The intended story length shall remain, but in response I will make a valiant attempt to keep unnecessary/gratuitous angst from the story with some added humor to stave off the low points. I’ll be the first to admit I’m a bit of a drama queen, so do let me know when things get a little out of hand ^_^;;;

To those of you who made references to this being "my story" and that I can write it any way I please, thank you for your consideration. However, I’d like you ALL to know that in the instance of this story I don’t entirely believe that. For me, trying to write a novel on the side, and doing several short stories for class, this story would simply not be worth my time and effort if not for you guys. I want you to have you say (recognizing that as the author I have the final decision) because this is as much for YOU as it is for me. Heck, silly-pants, this is a YOU insertion ^_^

Now that I’m back on track with a bit of a game plan…I just want to say thank you again to EVERYONE who gave me feedback. You ladies are –really- what keeps me here writing ~_^

~Ametank

PS- Don’t forget if you want to do some fanart-esque thing for this story I’d waaaaaaaaay love it!