Eternal Darkness

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General A/N: I don’t own the characters or show. I’m bad at editing, if I do it at all, so there will most likely be errors. I’m updating chapter by chapter so I’m not sure how often I’ll update, but I’ll try to make it soon. And lastly this story is told by Hiei’s POV.

I own nothing in this chapter except the ideas. If I owned Outback I would be eating it every single meal, every single day, trust me on this! *wipes drool off keyboard*

Warning: Blood is in this chapter, don’t like, don’t read.

I’ve watched many shows and movies and read many books on vampires, I was really into vampires, actually still am. So I’ve just combined some things about them. Plus made up some things.

Eternal Darkness
Part 14: Special Night
Ravenx

The gang does not believe that I have money. Which I don’tuallually blame them for thinking that. But I do have my ways of getting it when I need it. Not that I’m telling anyone.

When I asked Kurama out to dinner one night he gave me a look of surprise. I’m not sure if it was because of the money or because I had actually asked him out on a real ningen date.

The evening started out prefect. I waited at the corner of his street for him to meet me. Then we walked to his favorite restaurant, Outback. We sat talking about everything and nothing while he ate his salmon and I ate my prime rib. The chocolate thunder down under we shared for desert was delicious. Especially the ice cream. But not more delicious than the little drop that fell on Kurama’s hand which I licked off. Not really caring if anyone saw.

He had blushed and looked away from me while grinning. He is truly beautiful. After I took him to the park where we walked around, holding hands and sneaking kisses under trees. The night was going great. I knew he would remember it for the rest of his life.

But still deep down inside I had a doubt. What if he chose not to be with me for all eternity? What if he didn’t want to be a vampire? But I pushed those doubts out of my head as I guided him to a very expensive hotel. He looked at me questionable but said nothing as we walked into the lobby.

Now in the elevator I find myself nervous watching the numbers light up for the different floors. I just had to get the suite, which was located on the top, the twelfth, floor. I wanted it to be the best room they had to make this night special for him. And me.

I had called ahead before I had met with him and informed the hotel staff exactly what I wanted. I made it perfectly clear that if they messed up I would have their heads.

Just the fifth floor. Does this stupid elevator not go any faster? I could already be there by now if I were walking. Kurama must sense my nervousness, because he steps closer to me in the empty compartment and wraps his arm around my shoulder, smiling down at me.

I can see the question in his large emeralds. I know he wants to know why we are here. Why I have taken him out on a date and a romantic walk in the park? He will soon find out. If this thing will move that is.

As the thing finally reaches the twelfth floor I get off, with Kurama following quickly behind me. I realize that I’m moving faster than I should be and slow down. I’m excited. I want to see what he thinks of the room.

As I reach the suite door I pull out the sliding key they gave me. Looking at it and the contraption beside the door I quickly figure out what to do. Swiping the card, I open the door and move aside for him to enter first.

As he steps completely into the room I close the door behind me. Stepping beside him I look up to see his expression. He looks as if he is about to cry. I hope it is because he is happy. I take my eyes off him long enough to look around the room. Good, they did it as I told them.

Candles cast a light glow over the entire room. The smell of vanilla fills the room, as well as roses due to the petals. A trail of white and red rose petals leads from the door to the bed, where they litter the white silk sheets. There is another trail that leads to a door on the other side of the room.

I feel arms wrap around me and turn to see him bent down to my level. “Oh Hiei, you did all this for me?” He looks so beautiful in the candlelight. “I can’t believe this.” He kisses me on the lips.

I run my hands through his red locks before pulling back. “Why don’t you call your mother and tell her you won’t be home tonight. I have something I have to do right fast.”

He nods as he looks around the room for the phone. As he finds it I follow the other path of rose petals into the bathroom which is also lit with candles. Rose petals are all over the floor and floating on top of bubbles in the large tub.

I close the door behind me and head over to the tub. Sticking my hand in I find it nice and warm. Good, I told the people at the desk to start it about five minutes before I was bringing him here. Looks like they took my threats seriously.

The whole bathroom smells of jasmine. I think Kurama will like this a lot. I strip down to my boxers before heading back out to the bedroom and finding my fox sitting on the bed smelling some of the petals.

He smiles when he looks back up at me. When he notices my state of dress he stands and begins to undress himself. He takes his time, slowly teasing me as he reveals inch by inch of his skin.

I lick my lips as he tosses his shirt to the floor. He keeps eye contact with me as he toes off his shoes and socks. He lets his hands slide down his chest, as his fingers reach his pants he tormentingly unbuttons and unzips them.

He smirks as he walks my way, allowing the pants to slide from his hips. He steps out of them as he walks. Getting on his knees in front of me he runs his hands through my spiky hair while leaning in to brush his lips against mine.

“Why did you do all this?” His eyes are filled with wonder and wanting.

“Because I love you.” Simple enough for right now. “Now come. There’s more in here.”

I take his hand and pull him to stand. Leading him into the bathroom, I hear the surprised gasps from behind me. I smile as I pull him over to the giant tub. Turning I push his boxers to the ground. He does the same to me.

I help him into the tub. He grins as the warm water engulfs his pale yet ravishing body. I quickly slip in behind him, feeling the bubbles move around us. I lean forward and kiss the back of his smooth neck.

“When did you have time to do all this?” He leans back so that his back is pressed up against my chest.

“I called ahead. Do you like?” I reach over and grab a wash cloth by thge oge of the tub. I gently run it over his shoulders.

“I like a lot.” He giggles as the cloth slides over his chest and stomach. “I told my mom that I was staying at Yusuke’s tonight.” His hands glide along my thighs under the water causing my already hard erection to get harder.

He must notice because he pressing back against me more. I lean into his back, kissing behind his ears, running the cloth under the water on his legs. When I’m done Kurama moves up.

He turns on his knees, holding the edge of the tub to keep his balance. He moves up and straddles my thighs. Grinning he reaches down and kissing me before taking the wash cloth from me and beginning to wash my chest and arms.

When he reaches my waist he locks his eyes with mine as he takes my arousal in his hand. When did he drop the cloth? Never mind, I think I like it a lot better with out the cloth.

He kisses my nose, jaw, and ears. Nibbling on the lobe of my ear his pace picks up and I can’t help but growl out as I reluctantly reach down and stop his wonderful hands.

“Need you now.”

He just nods as he lifts his butt up and scoots forward, I stop him with my hands on his hips. Looking at him with concern I begin to ask him about lube, but he beats me to it.

“The water will help a lot. I’ll be fine. But I’m like you. I need you now.” I loosen my grip on his hips, which allows my length to sink into him.

He hisses at the momentary pain while he sits still on me. His head is thrown back giving me a perfect view of his neck, which I can’t help but reach out and lick.

Minutes pass before he finally looks back down at me with a smile. He takes a hold of my shoulders as he begins to slowly move up and down on my lap. With one hand on his hip, I run the other one up and down his back, feeling the slick skin move over slight muscles.

The slow pace that he is setting along with the movement of the water is driving me mad with desire for my fox. The fact that he starts to purr with pleasure only makes me want him even more, if that is possible.

His fingers tighten on my shoulder, I can feel my skin breaking under his finger nails. It actually feels good. I replace both my hands on his hips and start to raise him faster. Kissing his chin I work my way up to his ear and whisper.

“More.”

That’s all he needs before he begins to bounce up and down on my hard member. On each of his downward thrust I hit that sweet spot deep inside of him. He begins to chant my name over and over again. This is too much.

One of his hands moves from his vice like grip on my shoulder to wrap around his own member. His hand keeps pace with his bouncing. I lean up slightly and lick a trail from his chest to his chin, ending with a long, deep kiss on his lips.

His chanting becomes more erratic until finally his passage tightens, his essence spills out over the water. I can’t hold back any more and release my seed deep inside of him.

He slumps over on to me, his breathing irregular. His arms wrap around my waist, still not making a move to dislodge my member from his entrance.

“Love you Hiei.” He whispers into my ear, kissing down my neck to my shoulder where little marks are left from his nails. “Sorry about that.”

“It’s fine.” I kiss his shoulder as I lean forward, searching under the water for the wash cloth. Finding it I run it over both us real fast, cleaning his seed from our wet bodies.

Slowly he stands up on shaky legs, I soon follow. I step out of the tub first and retrieve a large fluffy white towel. I hold it out to him. He smiles before stepping into it.

I dry his body off, slowly sliding the towel over his slim form. Teasingly, just barely touching his member that is slowly starting to harden. As soon as his body is dry I make fast work drying myself. I don’t want him to have to do much tonight. This is his night.

“That was wonderful Hiei.” He bends and kisses my nose.

“It’s not over yet.” I gently push him toward the door. As he walks out I get a perfect view of his rounded bottom. I follow him after I get his gift from my pants pocket.

When I enter the bedroom I find him lying back on the pillows of the bed with a very erotic look on his face. This is as good of time as any.

“Kurama, I need to ask you something.” I crawl onto the bed and sit cross-legged beside him. He sits up, remaining facing the foot of the bed, he turns his head to look at me.

“What is it Hiei?”

I take a deep breath, keeping eye contact I begin. “Vampires need love. It makes us stronger. But that isn’t the only reason we need it. To live a life as long as a vampire alone would be horrible. We need mates, someone to love, by our side. But not just for a couple of decades, but for eternity. Kurama, I want you to be my mate.”

I hold out the small velvet box that I took from my pants. I take my eyes off his wide, wonder filled ones and look down at it. Opening it I turn it to him for him to see the contents of it.

As he looks down, his eyes widen even more. I thought that this gift was perfect for him. A simple white gold band with a small emerald and ruby in the center. Uncomplicated yet elegant.

I watch him closely for his reaction. The first thing I notice is the tears that shine in his rich green eyes, then his large smile. A shaky hand reaches out toward the ring but I gently grab it, stopping him from touching the ring. Here comes the hard part.

“Kurama being my mate means being by my side for all time. This means you have to be immortal. You have to be a vampire. Taking this ring would mean that you except that fact and will allow me to turn you. I know you need to think about this, it’s a touch decision. You should take your time.” I release his wrist and just watch him. I expect that he will want me to leave for a while, allowing him time to think over his options.

Instead he looks thoughtful for a moment, then his eyes met mine. “Hiei, to be honest this is something I have thought about ever since you told me you’re a vampire. I mean not the whole mate thing, but about being a vampire. I love you with all my heart. I want to be with you for as long as I can. If that means having to become a vampire than I’m prepared for that.” He reaches out and takes the ring from its velvet container, looking at it a moment before handing it to me. “Would you please?” He holds out his hand.

He accepted. He actually accepted. I smile as I take his hand and slide the ring on to his finger. It fits him exactly.

“It’s so beautiful.” He leans over and kisses me deeply.

I toss the box across the room and push him carefully back down on the bed, moving myself in between his legs. His long, smooth limps wrap around my waist, our erens rns rubbing together.

I kiss a path from his chest up his neck. Sucking on his lush lips, I run my fingers through his thick red hair. I pull back bringing one of my hands down to replace my lips. He gets the message and starts to suck a couple of my fingers in and out of his mouth.

Barely holding back a moan, I watch him as my fingers disappear into his mouth. I feel his tongue swirl around them. I can’t hold back any longer and when I’m sure that my fingers are wet enough I pull them out from between his voluptuous lips.

Letting my hand travel down his body and between his legs I press one of my saliva soaked fingers into his entrance. Even though I was just inside of him, he is still extremely tight.

We kiss as I add another finger, each inward stoke causing me to hit that spot deep within him that makes him bite down on my lip. He gives a moan as yet another finger enters him. I want him now.

Pulling out my fingers I quicklylacelace them with my erection, pushing into him until I am all the way inside. I pause, waiting for him to adjust while I continue to kiss his lips.

When his arms wrap around my shoulders, fingers running up and down my back, I start to move. Slowly. I want this to last. This will be the last time I make love to the ningen Kurama. From this night on he will be my mate, a vampire.

His head is thrown back, red hair spilling over the white pillows. The first thing I think of is blood. Soon there will be blood. His and mine.

My attention is drawn from his hair to his hand as it moves from my back to entangle in the sheets by his side. I can’t help but to smile as I see the ring resting perfectly on his finger.

“Hiei.” He moans out. My small, teasing thrusts must be making him crazy. I pick up pace just a little, still not wanting to go to fast. But like him, I don’t think I will last a lot longer.

I kiss his chin as I balance on one arm and start to pump his arousal with my other hand. The sweat that is forming on his body shines in the candlelight. His moans get louder as he approaches climax.

I keep a slow rhythm with both my hand and my hips but I know that that is enough for him. When I feel his tightness around me close in even more I lean down, licking his neck before letting my fangs extract. But pull back enough to look into his eyes.

He gives me a small nod before I return to his neck. When I feel the slickness covering my hand and my own orgasm starting I bite down. He makes a surprised groan before relaxing, wrapping his arms and legs tightly around me.

His blood is warm and sweet. It travels down my throat in thick rivers. As I drink from him I move my hips back slightly, causing my now soft member to exit him. His hands claw at my shoulder blades but not for much longer.

As I feel him getting weaker and weaker his arms and legs fall to the bed limply. He moans once more before I pull back, licking my lips and his neck of every last drop of the sweet nectar called blood.

Looking into his eyes I see a little fear, but quickly kiss him to reassure him that he will be fine. Still between his legs, I lean forward silently cursing myself for not having my katana with me. I look around the room trying to find something that I can use to cut my skin.

Not finding anything and getting impatient I finally just bring my hand up to my throat. My nails are not really that long or sharp but they will have to do. I press hard against my neck until I feel my skin break and pull the nail across until I have a small slit.

Moving my head to one side I lean down and let the cut slide over his lips. “Take some.”

I feel his rough tongue barely touch the cut, as if he is afraid of hurting me. He soon finds out that he needs my blood. The craving just one lick gives him becomes stronger. He begins to suck hard on my thin neck, taking my blood, which I offer freely.

I begin to weaken but let him continue to take some more. Slowly I pull back. Looking down into his glazed over emeralds. He is exhausted. The blood exchange has left both of us drained of energy, not to mention the long sessions of sex that we have shared tonight.

Rolling over beside him, I pull Kurama up against my chest letting his head tuck under my chin. His arms wrap weakly around my waist as I feel him drift off to sleep. And it doesn’t take me long to follow him.

Tomorrow should be interesting.

TBC
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I had actually stumped myself with the whole Kurama-vampire-sunlight thing and didn’t even realize it. But I came up with a solution. Its weird but this comes from my mind and besides its fanfiction. It ain’t suppose to make sense! *grins stupidly* You’ll find out what I’m talking about in the next chapter when ever I write it.

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