Eternal Darkness

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General A/N: I don’t own the characters or show. I’m bad at editing, if I do it at all, so there will most likely be errors. I’m updating chapter by chapter so I’m not sure how often I’ll update, but I’ll try to make it soon. And lastly this story is told by Hiei’s POV.

For those that are reading this but not reviewing go gcreime na grainneoga cealgrunacha do chuid fo-eadaigh (1). Hehehe…Just kidding. Gomen I’ve been up for like 30 hours straight and I think its getting to me. So I hope this part came out sounding half way deceit.


Eternal Darkness
Part 11: Friendly Competition
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“Go raibh maith agat (2)!” Jin says as Kurama hands him another piece of pizza.

The wind demon sure can put away some food. The pizza arrived about ten minutes ago and already he has eaten three pieces. Does he ever eat? Touya just grins as he finishes his first piece and begins a second.

“Do you want another slice Hiei?” Kurama looks over at me.

“No.” The one slice is enough after watching Jin.

Kurama just nods and moves back on the couch so that he is resting right up against me with his head on my shoulder and his hand on my thigh. I guess his one piece is enough for him too.

“Do you mind if I ask a question?” Touya looks at both of us for a moment.

Okay here we go. More vampire questions. But they seem pretty calm about everything so I really don’t mind answering them. I give him a nod.

“How long have you two been together?” That wasn’t something I was really expecting him to ask.

“Since yesterday.” Kurama blushes as he answers. I guess we have moved fast. But I have wanted him since I met him. It wasn’t fast enough for me.

“I was wondering when ya two would get together.” Guess Jin finally decides he’s had enough. “I just can’t believe ya tooklonglong to get to a aille (3) like him Hiei.”

I don’t exactly know what he called Kurama but it was something that made Touya look angry for a moment before Jin reaches down and kisses him on the cheek.

“Don’t act like that. Ta gra agam duit agus cha eile (4).” He kisses Touya’s cheek again but Touya still doesn’t look convinced. This is the time I wish I could understand what ever Jin says.

Jin reaches under Touya’s arms and pulls him up on to his lap. He starts to whisper into the ice demon’s ear between nips and licks.

Suddenly I’ve become more aware of the fox beside me. I want to be doing that to him. I glance over at him and find him watching the two demons. I lean down and kiss his forehead. When he looks at me all I can see is love in his large emeralds.

I kiss him again, this time on his soft lips. And this is when I realize that this is all that matters to me. This seemingly innocent, sweet fox that is moaning under my lips. Nothing outside of this house will ever change the fact that I love him more than anything in the world. Not Yusuke. Not Kuwabara. No one and nothing.

If they don’t except the fact that I am a vampire or that Kurama is mine, I will be fine. I’ve told myself for the past several hours that I’ll do anything as long as they continue to be Kurama’s friend. But if they honestly don’t like the facts then who cares. I’ll take Kurama away from them and he can make new friendsiendiends that won’t judge him.

I’m drawn out of my thoughts as I feel Kurama move over to straddle my lap. He kisses up my jaw and to my ear where he nips at my lobe. I bring my hands down on his round bottom and squeeze as I kiss his neck that is presented to me.

I hear a moan that doesn’t belong to Kurama and look over his shoulder to see Jin and Touya in the same position that we are in. Touya moans as Jin kissing down his neck as he pulls up the blue shirt he wears.

I feel Kurama reach for my shirt and disentangle myself from him long enough to have it thrown off me. He slides down onto the floor on his knees as he kissing a trail down my chest. I watch him rather than the other two demons as he takes one of my nipples into his mouth and gently bites it.

He opens his eyes and looks at me as he swirls his tongue around the hardened nub. I don’t think anyone else could look as innocent doing this as my fox does. He grins as he moves over to the other one. His hand moves up my chest to my neck where it massages.

As I hear another loud groan I look up again to find Touya shirtless. His back is arched and his head is thrown back as Jin sucks on his lean chest.

The lips on my chest and the hand on my neck leaves me and I look down to find Kurama removing his shirt. His lean body is slick with sweat as he pulls me down a little so that our lips meet in another passion filled kiss.

I want him and I want him now. But he is mine and I don’t want anyone else looking at what is mine.

Some how I find the strength to stand and pull him up with me. I start to move toward the stairs and feel him following. His arms encircle my neck from behind as we reach the bottom step.

“Race you to the bed.” He whispers in my ear before I see a flash of red pass me.

I just grin. Does he really think he can beat me to the bedroom? In a flash I pass him as he finishes climbing the stairs. I continue until I’m in his room and stand off to the side where he can not see me.

When he enters he looks around, knowing I’m there. As he passes me I jump out at him and tackle him to the bed. He lands on his stomach with a groan as I sit on his rear end, straddling his hips.

“What do I get for winning?” I whisper as I lean down and move his hair from his neck. I kiss the nape of his long neck.

“Whatever you want.” He moans as I run my hands up and down his back.

“What if I want you?”

“I’m already yours.” I can’t help but moan as I hear those words leave his perfect mouth. Soon, he will be mine in every since of the word.

I kiss down his back as I slide down his legs to stand on the floor. I kiss to his waistband and find a problem. He just has to be wearing jeans, doesn’t he. I growl as I grab his hips and flip him over. What I see drives me crazy with need.

His cheeks are flushed and his breathing is uneasy as he stares at me with wide green eyes. His lips are barely parted and his hands are running up and down his own chest. I want him now!

I make quick work with his jeans and throw them across the room. But still I can’t get to my desired destination. Maybe when I make him mine completely I can get him to stop wearing underwear. I take a look at him again laying on the bed. Maybe not. He looks good in nothing but red boxers.

But right now they have got to go. I pull them down his slim hips and toss them where pantpants went. I hold back a moan at the sight that awaits me.

Kurama sits up and moves to the headboard. He leans against it as he motions for me to join him with his finger. As I start to crawl onto the bed he holds his hand up to stop me. What now?

“Don’t you think your wearing to many clothes?” I do believe he is right. In a blink of an eye I’m standing at the foot of the bed nude. His smile tells me that he’s satisfied so I crawl up the bed to him.

He spreads his legs for me so I can crawl up to him on my knees and lean over him with my hands on either side of his hips. His head is resting against the headboard and I lean forward to take his lips.

“Right there baith (5)!”

I pull away from Kurama’s lips and look toward the door. I didn’t know Touya could yell that loud. I turn back at the sound of a giggle.

“I guess Jin’s hit the right mark.” He goes into a full on laugh as he brings one of his hands to his mouth to try and hide his grin. I just smirk as I see his beautiful body shacking with laughter.

Since he is preoccupied I lean down and lap at his navel. He instantly stops laughing and beings to moan. I smirk more as I begin to lick my way up his chest to his neck where I give him a little nip, still not using my fangs, and continue to his lips.

I pull back and look into his eyes. “Your beautiful fox.” He blushes as he tries to hide behind his red hair. I push it out of the way and kiss him again.

“You’re not to bad yourself.” He says as he kisses me back.

I reach over to the nightstand after the kiss ends and find the bottom of lotion where I left it last night. I quickly coat my fingers with it and lean in again to steal a kiss as one of my fingers enters his tight passage.

When he begins to buck back on it I add another as I kiss down his neck to his shoulder. His arms wrap around my neck and he pulls me closer as I add yet another finger to his slick entrance.

“Hiei…mmmm.” I love it when he moans. He bits my ear gently before I feel that he is ready and remove my fingers. I start to position myself at his entrance but he stops me. He gives me a smirk that could rival my own as he pushes me until I fall to the bed on my back.

I don’t even have time to think before I feel a hot, tight heat around my arousal and hear a hiss of pain. I look up to see Kurama straddling me with his head thrown back and his lips open. He remains still for a moment before bringing his hands to either side of my head and looking down at me with a smile.

“You little mesu no kitsune (6).” He just gives a little laugh as he starts to move.

With this position I’m deeper inside of him and I don’t think I can last long. But he is moving slow. And I mean slow! He braces his hands on my chest to help him as he moves up and down. I grip his hips to try and make him move faster but he swats at my hands and shakes his head no.

I don’t know how much I like this position after all. He gets to have more control. If it were up to me I would be pounding him into the bed by now. And by the sounds I’m hearing coming from downstairs I think that’s what Jin is doing to Touya. No fair!

Since he won’t let me touch his hips I move my heads to his shoulders and bring him down so that I can devour his lips. His hands roam from my chest to the bed by either side of my head as he slows his movement and moans into the kiss.

“I want more, now.” He pants as the kiss ends. I give him a grin as I use all my strength to move us. He moans as he finds his self on his back with his legs wrapped around my waist. He gives me a disbelieving look, probably can’t figure out how I moved us without existing his warm body.

I brace myself with my hands at his sides on the bed before beginning to pound into him the way I wanted from the start. He just moans louder and commences to pant my name over and over again.

His already tight entrance seems to be getting tighter as he reaches between our moving bodies and strokes his erection. I balance myself on one arm as I move the other down to join his hand. He looks me in the eye and smiles as we both bring him to completion screaming my name.

I hope Jin and Touya heard that. But I don’t have much time to think about it as my word turns upside down and I cum deep inside of him. I thrust a couple more times before stopping but I stay inside of him.

I look down to see a smile on his flushed face. I bring my hand up from his now limp erection to my lips and lick his essence off. He watches me for a moment before doing the same thing to his hand. I moan as I gently pull out of him and lay beside him.

He rolls onto his side to face me before leaning forward and kissing my nose. “Ai shirteru, Hiei.” He buries his head under my chin and wraps an arm and a leg around me causing me to smile. I bring a hand up to run through his soft hair.

“Ai shirteru kitsune.”

TBC
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Irish Gaelic:
1) Go gcreime na grainneoga cealgrunacha do chuid fo-eadaigh – May the malevolent hedgehogs gnaw at your underwear
2) Go raibh maith agat – Thank you
3) aille – beauty
4) Ta gra agam duit agus cha eile – I love you and no other
5) baith – love
Japanese:
6) mesu no kitsune – vixen

I don’t know why but I felt lemony today. So I hope you guys liked it.

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