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for A Simple Gift

by Mieren

person Jayn
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly loved your story. ^_^
person darkperfection
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cool thanks for updating good job.
person foxfire
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"okay,i found this storie sometime ago, and me being the dummie that i am, never reiviewed to it, so here it goes,...... I LOVE YOURE STORIE, I SWEAR IT HAD MY LAUGHING LIKE A CRAZY PERSON!!" *breath* " it was very good and i like how you delt with the bondage idea, your storie is actually very creative for such a tapic thats been done qite a bit, and i was surprised when it was not only Kurama and Hiei, but also Yuusuke too! Ani adored reading this pairing so much, with this topic, that ive actually been looking for more like it. Any ways, i really liked the ideas in your storie, the ending, myself, i think i might change, but thats just me,(cause im a sap for happy happy endings, lol.)allin all, it goes on my top ten."
person Kaijou
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG *point* the guys in the castle thing they were Duo and Yugi and Piccalo right?? I KNOW I'M RIGHT ABOUT THE FIRST TWO!!! I know Duo anywhere!
person hColleen
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty :D Okay...that's an odd adjetive, but...well, I can't think of a better one. Lemons may be difficult for you to write, but you do them well.. You're very good at describing the action in a scene along with the emotions...I would rather the plot went slightly differently, but you are the author and that is your domain, not mine :D I enjoyed it.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! ^__^ Great idea, and excellently done -- go you!!! Keep up the good work!!!
person cdkobasiuk
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A really great story. Nicely written.

cdk
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful and extremely comical. I beg for a sequel. :)
person xtremereddragon
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you did very well on the story i was impressed, i couldnt tear my eyes away from it. i hope you write more stories soon
person StormAZ
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
haha ... that was great! One way to teach hormone driven males a lesson ^_~
That was a really cute story and I enjoyed it immensely!