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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I like this story, and I want it to continue, so I wrote one of the fights for you. I don't know if it is any good, and I am to lazy to email it so I included it in the end of the review. pe ype you update soon.
Both demons walked to the middle of the arena, the glint in their eyes the only hint that they were looking forward to the fight. Once they reached the center, they faced each other, each knowing this would be a good fight. Kurama reached into his hair and readieroserose, turning it into his famous whip. Hiei drew his sword, pointing it toward the ground. Each demon studied his opponent, waiting for the first move. Hiei took the initiative, and flitted out of sight, Kurama waiting to make his move. Suddenly Kurama did a graceful backflip, at the same time lashing out with his rose whip and blocking Hiei's sword. He lashed out again, striking Hiei's right arm, creating a small tear in his clothing. Hiei flitted out of sight again, reappearing behind Kurama and slashing at his back, ripping Kurama's shirt. Kurama turned around, but Hiei was already gone. Kurama stopped and spread his senses, waiting to see what Hiei's next move would be. He suddenly started to wrap his sword around his hand, turning it into a sword, and whirled around to parry Hiei's downward slash. Both quickly jumped back, only to rush at each other again. No one could follow the series of moves that were made, but when they stopped, Hiei had his sword at Kurama's heart, and Kurama had his at Hiei's throat. It was a tie.
Both demons walked to the middle of the arena, the glint in their eyes the only hint that they were looking forward to the fight. Once they reached the center, they faced each other, each knowing this would be a good fight. Kurama reached into his hair and readieroserose, turning it into his famous whip. Hiei drew his sword, pointing it toward the ground. Each demon studied his opponent, waiting for the first move. Hiei took the initiative, and flitted out of sight, Kurama waiting to make his move. Suddenly Kurama did a graceful backflip, at the same time lashing out with his rose whip and blocking Hiei's sword. He lashed out again, striking Hiei's right arm, creating a small tear in his clothing. Hiei flitted out of sight again, reappearing behind Kurama and slashing at his back, ripping Kurama's shirt. Kurama turned around, but Hiei was already gone. Kurama stopped and spread his senses, waiting to see what Hiei's next move would be. He suddenly started to wrap his sword around his hand, turning it into a sword, and whirled around to parry Hiei's downward slash. Both quickly jumped back, only to rush at each other again. No one could follow the series of moves that were made, but when they stopped, Hiei had his sword at Kurama's heart, and Kurama had his at Hiei's throat. It was a tie.
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter very much!! Its soo funny, everyone losing so fast in the tournement(I think I spelled that wrong)its more funny then anything! I like your writing very much!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yami Kitsune: Yay for more chapters!
Rurouni_agra: Oh give yourself a little credit, it wasn't THAT bad. But I'm with Hiei, give the Kenshingumi a little more credit.
Yami Kitsune: And by the way; WAY TO GO YAHIKO! I don't like Kaoru. ~...MY Kenshin...oops, I didn't mean to say that...~ AND SANO *drool* ~.. KUSO, I need to get control of myself...baka Kuwabara...~ AND AOSHI ~....stupid Misao, he MINE!~
Rurouni_agra: *ignors her yami's muttering* The only fight I DIDN'T like was Kenshin and Hiei, but this is a YYH fic and he is Rain's brother so he kind of HAD to win, but Kenshin culd at least have made it hard for him.
Yami Kitsune: Shut up and let her write the damn fic however she wants!
Rurouni_agra: Yea, what she said...don't let anyone tell you should have done somehign else, it IS your fic. We can't wait to hear from you again, Ja ne!
Rurouni_agra: Oh give yourself a little credit, it wasn't THAT bad. But I'm with Hiei, give the Kenshingumi a little more credit.
Yami Kitsune: And by the way; WAY TO GO YAHIKO! I don't like Kaoru. ~...MY Kenshin...oops, I didn't mean to say that...~ AND SANO *drool* ~.. KUSO, I need to get control of myself...baka Kuwabara...~ AND AOSHI ~....stupid Misao, he MINE!~
Rurouni_agra: *ignors her yami's muttering* The only fight I DIDN'T like was Kenshin and Hiei, but this is a YYH fic and he is Rain's brother so he kind of HAD to win, but Kenshin culd at least have made it hard for him.
Yami Kitsune: Shut up and let her write the damn fic however she wants!
Rurouni_agra: Yea, what she said...don't let anyone tell you should have done somehign else, it IS your fic. We can't wait to hear from you again, Ja ne!
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November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I found it interesting!! You did a fine job with the fight scenes. I know i coul dnot ahve done better!! I look forward to the rext.
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November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad you updated. all of your fics. i really enjoyed reading them. yes, even this one. i thought the fights were kinda cool, a little short but heh, i completely understand and i give y lot lot of credit for even attempting it. can't wait for the next chapter in of of the three fics (sorry i didn't review the other two). :)
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Have fun. We'll wait. Be happy. ^_^ Life is good...even when it sucks! :D Ja!
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far!! I love it!! And Rain is having TRIPLETS!!! YAY!! Well its awsome so far, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear 'bout the emotional and physical upheaval.
Try watching the "Rocky Horror Picture Show" it always cheers me up.
Take your time with the next chapter. It'll hit you eventually.
(If not a new chapter, then maybe some debris from the
accumulated audience! I warn you, they're not nice ppl)
Anyways, here's hoping for better times and more chappies!
CybrEmly01
Try watching the "Rocky Horror Picture Show" it always cheers me up.
Take your time with the next chapter. It'll hit you eventually.
(If not a new chapter, then maybe some debris from the
accumulated audience! I warn you, they're not nice ppl)
Anyways, here's hoping for better times and more chappies!
CybrEmly01
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love your story. It is well written. Please e-mail me when you update it. Thanks.
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg another awsome chapter..hehe escpecially Kuwabara and Hiei's gifts..the idiots guide books hehe too funny...and Rain is having triplets??? awwwwwwwwwww but ouch hope she can handle it..hehe and Kurama, bet he had a naughty big pride filled smile on his face..gotta luv him..soo cant wait to read your next chap, the one with the tournament that out to be fun..again great chap and cant wait for you update..hope your kids are doing better gf, have a stupid cold again myself and dont like being sick, seems Im always sick..sheesh, anyhow hope they get better if they are not yet..much huggles and smiles a friend and fan Mija..:-)