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for Of Demons, Wands and Swords

by shanirah

person CybrEmly01
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you're a naughty Everqueen - but we love you. Probably because you're a naughty Everqueen...

person Bree McGregor
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woohoo I wish you would update sooner! LOL and my voite is for RAVENS! as normal! anway theres a gap in there i would like you to clarify. the wait is killing me!!! Well please update soon!
person Birdy06
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story but I think Botan and Hiei would've been a better couple.Other than that this fic is very original.Please update. Arigatou!
JA NE!
person Bree
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhh thisgettgetting good girl!!! and i vote for RAVENS... I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO HIEI!!!!!!!!!!!
person CybrEmly01
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, definately "Ravens".

Just gotta adore the Yummy Youko and equally drool-worthy Hiei.

Sorry, my libido is acting up and I'm out of chocolate. I beg you to make
no sudden moves around me for your own safety. I've been known to bite,
painfully. So says my last "victim" Y'know he enjoyed it, the perv. But
that'll teach him to steal my caramels.

Anyways, wonderfulness abounds. I've got my fingers crossed 'bout your
computer problems.

CybrEmly
person alaina
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey did i review yet? well i'm not sure but i like your story so update as soon as you can please PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Lauren
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chap if a little short. But hey its an update, beggers can't be choosers right? Anyway, I hope Rain will be all right! Ahhhh! I'm gonna go insane with not knowing whats gonna happen! Update soon please!
person Beowulf
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really great story, I really enjoy reading it. I am not sure if you need this or not, but here is a link to a really great Rurouni Kenshin site that has all the Hiten Mitsurugi moves. http://www.sitepros.net/kenshin/hmr.asp
Here is another link that shows all the other moves that he uses. http://www.sitepros.net/kenshin/kengumi_char.asp
Can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^
person Sade
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woooooooow, that was….. INTERESTING. My curiosity is driving me CRAZY, write woman, you MUST write, *on hands ‘n knees* PLEEEAASSEE… oh and by the way, so good to hear ur family is doin so well… And I say you should put a really big pic of Hiei on a wall across from the Kurama one >>>>*Hiei obsessed*<<<< make it really big, REALLY REALLY BIG. ^___^;; heh I don’t even think I’m talking about the same thing anymore… Allwell, ur doin great, keep it up, update soooooooon!

Sade, the PRchica
person becky
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that so far this has been an excellent story. I can't wait for the next chapter. The only disappointing scenes were the fight scenes. Here you have some of the greatest fighters together and there bouts only last a couple seconds; definitely uncool. Is Hiei going to find some one there at the school? I am glad you made Drake so human and put him with Hermione I always thought he had potential. I also like how you are keeping the characters true to themselves and not making them whiny or weak.
On another note I am surprised that you have time to write with two kids with special needs. I have a sister I care for and between school and work and her I don’t have time to read (not like I do in the summer anyway) much less do anything creative. I am a bookworm and just recently discovered fan fictions. I am now in heaven and constantly on the computer when I should be doing my algebra. By the way what is a beta reader? I caught that on one of your chapters and have seen it mentioned before. Keep up the great work I am going to see if I can find more of your stories.