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by shanirah

person Mija
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh I liked this chapter alot..:-) hope you feel better and although I cant wait to read more, I will be patient till you up aup and ready to write again, I know how things can get..be well and safe and happy..Huggs Mija..:-)
person Mystaea
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, very original. I usually don't line super-power OC's in HP, but in YYH it works a lot better! Everyone is very well done and in character, and I have only one tiny point to make. In the show, Yukina NEVER calls Kuwabara by his family name the way everyone else does. She always calls him Kazuma, and now that they're married, I think it would be even more consistant. Also, are you going to introduce Shiziru? She's such a great character for Kuwabara bashing, and I think she and Raven teaming up on him and Yusuke would be priceless! Keep up the great story, I am really looking forward to more
person Mija
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh this story just keeps getting better and better..(bites nails in anticipation of next chap) I soo cant wait to read the next one..I luv this story..:-) ty for letting me know it was up..:-) what else can I say except UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!...lol..huggs Mija :-)
person dunken
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
w gre great story line. and i don't usually like yaoi stories. probably not the best one to start out with but i still like it and i will continue to read it. so, that means, you need to continue to write it.
person Mija
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lmaoooooooo omg this keeps getting better and better..and I loved the M/M lemon scene it was perfect..really liked it when they both stared at her chest and she offered to pull it up for them..hehe was priceless, and the way Kurama yelled Heies name when he offered to help wash her hair?? omg still laughing this was a great chap please update soo ok?? and ty sooo much for emailing me about the update, if you can still do it again when you update it would be fantistic if not I will come back and check to see if any new ones are posted, cant wait to read more..:-)
person Susanna
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I'm an Italian girl (so, please, forgive me if my English is not very well...)
I've read a lot of yyh fanfiction and I can tell that yours is VERY BEAUTIFUL and INTRIGUING... I) hope it will be a lemon soon! Go on writing!!!!!
person Mija
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh this story is sooooooooo cool, I dont get to read much of Yu Yu stories since my main intrest is Inuyasha but I do love Yu Yu and I would soo love it if you could be sooo kind in letting me know when you update..luv this story hope you update sooon please email me at BusinessMija@aol.com/ t...h...huggs Mija
person songkiya
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this fic rocks!! update soon, pleaseeeee ^ ^