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for Ravens

by shanirah

person Katy
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it!! I can't wait to read more of it!!
person sciphy
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww! I am loving this story! Hell at this point I am just having so much fun with all of your stories on aff.net, can you just update them all..... like really really soon..... but hey you know what would make it better.... siri/jin i just happen to think that that would be great.... yeah, you should be very very proud of your stories.... i am usually only a slash shipper.... once in a while I read triads... but i almost never read het.... well let me just say that yours is the first that i have read of my own accord in the past year..... ..... ..... ..... ...... .......... sorry, my mind drifted off to lovely mental images of siri/jin and hell sev/karasu wow that is a scorching image.... all growly and ......OHHHHHH! okay so anyways... um if you don't have a beta... i would be happy to volunteer for the job...... ummmm and if you would email me whenever you update.... i don't know if you do that for people.... but um if you do.... yeah well.... ummmm much of the goody goody mental pictures to you... do you have a website?
person Lauren
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ver very funny chapter!! I loved it!! It was awsome, can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person Lauren
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very very funny chapter!! I loved it!! It was awsome, can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person Lauren
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The last reveiw I sent you, i sent it 2 times, sorry!! Good story and next time I'll try not to send 2 of the same review.
person Mija
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg that was just too priceless...still lmaoo...hehe just picturing hiei all hyper like a little oompa loompa chanting candy candy candy...lol..then hopping up and down on Kuwabara like a manic monkey...lol...this was truelly an awsome chapter I sooo luved it..great humor great chap and congrats on becoming an auntie..lol..till you update again be well safe and happy huggs Mija..:-)
person dunken
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was great. so very amusing and i must admit, that was the most entertaining author's notes i have ever read. it was great! i loved it. the chapter was really fun too. oi, hiei on a sugar high, how funny. it was quite entertaining and i'm glad you were able to update before taking off. can't wait for the next one!
person Lauren
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So totally kool so far!!!! I really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!!! You are a great writer!!!
person dunken
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow! i liked that chapter. i thought it was really well written and i'm glad you were able to update so soon. i can't wait for the next update so please update soon! oh, by the way, how was the n... ressurected show (i've go no clue how to spell that)? i wanted to see it but i guess i missed it. oh well, anyway, please update soon as i can't wait to read the next chapter!
person Mija
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
as usual another great chapter..:-) reallved ved the scene when Raven and Heie were caught, then Kurama joined in..hehe cant wait to read how they act ar eac each other once the rest leave..hehe thats going to be good, cant wait..:-) ty for letting me know it was up..huggs Mija..:-)