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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absloutely love the fic and can't wait to read the sequal.
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very, very good story. I've really enjoyed what you've written so far, and look forward to more.
~Marikalay
~Marikalay
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I like it. Don't see this to often. But can you add Draco Malfoy in there somewhere please. I'd like to see what happens when he meets our dragon master. just a thuoght.
But I like Draco Malfoy so PLEASE be nice to him. But don't make him all soft. He has to be completely arragent and a total ass. Please. Thanks.
But I like Draco Malfoy so PLEASE be nice to him. But don't make him all soft. He has to be completely arragent and a total ass. Please. Thanks.
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE put DRACO MALFOY in there somewhere. This is a gooory ory and all but it would be better with Draco in it. PLEASE BE NICE TO HIM!!
I really like cocky Draco. No soft stuff for him.
I really like cocky Draco. No soft stuff for him.
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let me get straight to the piont. You need to put DRACO MALFOY in there some where.
Ans no fluffy stuff either. He has to be a totally cocky basterd.
Besides, I'd like to see what Hiei thinks of his name.
That would be cool.
So bOL! OL! Be SLYTHERINE!!
Ans no fluffy stuff either. He has to be a totally cocky basterd.
Besides, I'd like to see what Hiei thinks of his name.
That would be cool.
So bOL! OL! Be SLYTHERINE!!
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do you even check these things?
Anyway, I agree with this other lot that sent in reviews.
You need to put in that cocky, silver blonde, DRACO MALFOY in there.
Feel hounored. I almost NEVER writte reviews. In fact this is ther first review I've ever put up on this site.
God Bless
Anyway, I agree with this other lot that sent in reviews.
You need to put in that cocky, silver blonde, DRACO MALFOY in there.
Feel hounored. I almost NEVER writte reviews. In fact this is ther first review I've ever put up on this site.
God Bless
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WE WANT DRACO MALFOY!! WE WANT DRACO MALFOY!! DRACO! DRACO! DRACO! DRACO!
D.!!! R.!!! A.!!! C.!!! O.!!!
DRACO MALFOY!!!!
GO SLYTHERINE!!!
Better than you? Ya damn strait!!
Please add a Draco Malfoy seen. And be nice to him.
I think DRACO should be seeing GINNY. And Raven and DRACO are good friends because shes almost slytherine.
Almost, but not quite. ~_^
D.!!! R.!!! A.!!! C.!!! O.!!!
DRACO MALFOY!!!!
GO SLYTHERINE!!!
Better than you? Ya damn strait!!
Please add a Draco Malfoy seen. And be nice to him.
I think DRACO should be seeing GINNY. And Raven and DRACO are good friends because shes almost slytherine.
Almost, but not quite. ~_^
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey the storys great so far ceep up the good work
~Hiei
~Hiei
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I only have time to read ch 1 right now, but what I read looks good. I'll read the rest and give my opinion on it when I have time.
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I take back what I said. This is a Mary Sue, and as such, a bad story. You did a good job of hiding that fact at the beginning, though. Maybe if yoleavleave out stupid parts about 'instant, OOC desire' and 'soulmate' this would still be good. It would also take it out of Mary Sue territory, because such stories are defined by these ridiculous things.