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for Sweet Release

by Ravenx

person okami
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love it a lot so is hiei gonna return or not a kna know now please hiei&kurama is my fav pairing in yuyuhakusho good job
person Mija
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwww it was short but soo sweet..the content made up for the shortness, cause it had everything it needed, alittle fluff alittle sadness and a little teasing with a little dash of lime..(grins) great chap cant wait to you update again..:-)
person Tanzina&Mikana
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww.... Hiei is going to come back right???? Right??? *looks panicky* I love this whole story!! You're great!!
person Tanzina&Mikana
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*cat ears, whiskers, and cat paws have appeared on Tanzina as she paws at the computer screen* Oh, that sucked... In a very good way. Meow! *suggestive stare* Encore, encore!!!!!!!
person Everqueen
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, way better then my first Lemon scene I ever wrote with Hiei and Kurama. i thought you did a good job on it. Please do write another chapter.
person JesPaiTha
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DEAR LORDS! That was so good! I love the way you made the lemon! ( I Love the controlable Hiei!) *chuckles lightly* you have to continue quickly! Please!?
person Mija
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
are ya kidding?? I luved it..that was intense and soo good...I like seeing Heie and Kurama together..that was a killer chap Raven, please let me know when you update K?? again luved it..keep it up..:-)
person Everqueen
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Was Hiei going to kill Kurama cause he admitted he loved Kurama or because our favorite fox boy was late getting to his room? Other then that confusing me, which just might be my mind messing with I l I liked it. Keep it up.
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hiei is just so ADORABLE, no matter what he does. It doesn't matter if he's killing someone, or kissing someone. He's just so freakin' cute! Anyway, just thought I'd drop by and tell you to write more, and soon, because I like it. Lots of people like it, so write more!!!

Much *evil* love,
Chie
person Tanzina&Mikana
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hikage: *purrs in contentment before jumping up and curling around the mouse on the computer stand*
Tanzina: Hikage what are you doing reading fanfiction? *sees the cat purring* On second thought I don't need to know........ Anyway I love the story!!! Write more soon! Please have a lemon soon!!! It's been sweet so far. I liked the poem that you had Hiei write for Kurama, is res really sweet. (Sweet is the word of the day ^.^;) Anyway write more soon! (I say anyway an awfot..ot....I need a new base word..... *ponders*)