AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Sweet Release

by Ravenx

person MultifacetedTune
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yet another excellent story! I love how you added a bit of humor in this one...actually, there was humer in many of your other stories, but I just noticed it more in this one! ^__^ I also loved the beginning of this -- very creative!!! Keep up the good work! Ja ne!!!
person Youko_Akiria
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOH! I want to know what happens next! Great story, by the way.
person Katy
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was very good! I loved it!!
person Mija
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh that was an awsome ending was totally awsome I luved it...:-) ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija
person JesPaiTha
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! I was really in the mood for a lemon thank you! Oh, and I love the way you did it, I'm always in for the dominant Hiei. *shudders* Please make another story! *pleads on bended knees*
person Everqueen
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW a monster, yeah. Nice, thanks for the last chapter.
person Amara
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story. Please continue. Oh and don't worry the story was great and if your chaptere die different lengths it will be even better. It makes the reader stay in suspense some more.
person Anya
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!!! I just love your stile of writing!!! Your story is very very very sweet & romantic. Please, don't live it unfinished... I really wanna know what happens next. Best Wishes. :)
person Katy
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!!! But can you let us know if Hiei comes back?? Man you write very good!!! Looking forward to reading more!!
person IYYASHI
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Oh how cute!
Yumi: I thought you stop calling gs cgs cute?
Yuji: Nope I thought everything was cute here the fic was cute the couple was cute oh and the author most be cute to write such a cute fic
Yumi: Once again you call the author cute when you don't even know 'im
Yuji: So?
Yumi: *Sigh* Just stop with the cute shit I enjoyed the lemons!
Yuji: Uh ok I liked the romance parts
Yumi: Right whatever
Yuji: If there is more Update!