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for Afternoon Love

by Ravenx

person kitsune2290
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice very nice your a great writter! i would love to see ou doing more hiei kurama work, wwe is all good and all but you can really pull off this yu yu gig ^.~ im very impressed and as a editor, i advise you to persue this as a career! if not then please just write to keep all your loyal fans happy ^.~ hope to see you writting more soon,

- Sarah a.k.a. Kit
person JesPaiTha
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I can't believe Yusuke and Botan catched them though, that was awesome. ^-^
person Everqueen
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very tastefully done. Better then some slash that I have read.
person Spark-gurl
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Its me! Sparky from ff.net Yah, this was on of the links that I heard of too that you could post lemons and stuff. Heh. Yay! Its the comleted one! Sparky like! *.*
person An
schedule December 29, 1919 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!! I've just read it. Hmmm... it's nasty - that's why I like it very much. :) But i've got one complaint: Hey!!! it's too damn short!!!!
P.s.: cruel ending...:)
Lemme know if you'll write something similar to that; still, God!, make it about 50 pages, please!!!! I know I'm asking too much. :) Bad Anya!!!
Sayounara!!!