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by Artemick

person Anon
schedule February 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love your Kaito/Kurama fics! I hope you haven't stop writing. I also love the way you write. Your style is very impressive. Keep going!
person Heidi
schedule August 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think my favorite thing about the way you write Kurama is the way you perfectly balance his calm, reasonable, nearly pacifistic demeanor with his breaking point when he's pushed too far, and then the way you handle his rage - controlled, rigid, unwavering. It's a mixture of soft and cold, kind and cruel, that is wonderfully in-character, and you've accomplished it with grace in this fic.

As usual, I love the interactions between these two. Your manner of writing - with short, clean, powerful sentences - really conveys mood and moves the story along. Great stuff, and as usual, looking forward to more from you.