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by ShioriFoxiesMom

person Anon
schedule February 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I don't lnow if you're still writing stories or are active in the fandom but I gotta say, I love your fics! I read all of them and enjoyed them so much!
person kerbear
schedule November 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You have not finished this story yet. I hope everything with you and your family are doing
ok. I look forward to seeing the last chapter to this story. And than what else you have in the works
for your next story.
person Danielle
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE finish this story! I am absolutely in love!
person kerbear
schedule July 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
o my! please don't do what I think you are going to do.,And leave Hiei's memories in tact. Wondering who is going to find them first
Yomi or Yusuke? Hope you had a great time at the game. And cant wait for the next chapter.

great job
person kerbear
schedule June 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. The baby shower was a great idea, just getting everyone together. Both moms still have some issues I think.
Starting over again with the memory loss (oh no)Can't wait to see how his Youko mom handles this.
You have the same chapter up twice(chapter 21 as 21 and as chapter 22)
person kerbear
schedule May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Though the meeting between moms was calmer than I thought it would be(not sure what I was expecting)
Human city life could be fun to see through Iris eyes, the two moms shopping for the shower together could be interesting .
Can't wait to see what comes up next.
person kerbear
schedule May 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a great way to interject Kurama's Yuko mom. Wondering though are Both is moms going to meet? that could be comical to see.
Great chapter and can't wait for the next one to come .
person Kitsubug
schedule May 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is very good!! I really enjoyed reading it. I'm sad it's not done I wanted to know what happened in the end. It was great that you had the plot of him losing his memory but that getting it back wasn't the end. I'm looking forward to the rest. Secretly I'm hoping for a girl because I feel that dads are captivated by baby girls when they are born. Or even twins, since Hiei and yu kinda were it would make sense twins run in the family. I'm interested to see how the birth happens and how kurama breastfeeds if he does. a++++ so far!
person kerbear
schedule May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good to see Kurama calming down a little little bit. Though another great chapter, it reads a little rushed for you.
Can't wait to see how other youko's are going to react to Hiei. This could be good or bad.
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
person kerbear
schedule April 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It seems Yusuke will be a great but quite learning tool for Kurama. Neat thought. Going back to the demon world sounds like the stress relief
Kurama may need yet what have you got planned there? Can't wait to see. A boy or girl? Good question, there are pros and cons to both. Yet I'm
hoping for a boy that can do a great fire plant thing.A boy is a little less frilly for a guys ego, yet a strong female half fox could be just as much
a hand full from/for both Hiei and Kurama. Can't wait to see what you decide this time. Though I vote for only One child 2 could be a little to much for
Kurama this time.
Great job as always, can't wait for the next chapter