rate_review Reviews

Try removing the story and reposting it with a different file type. Uploading txt usally comes out perfect. (To convert a file into txt open your file and go to 'save as' select plain text or txt, depending on how it appears on your menu. Then save.) Don't feel bad. I didn't know the file type could make such a difference until I failed a Shakespear class over it. I sent all my papers to my instructer in wsp and it turned up on his PC as incripted garble.

My first and only suggestion (because I haven't actually read the story and this is also the reason why) is to use paragraph breaks. Paragraphs are a reader's friend and a writer's ally. Become familiar with it and you may go far ;) Seriously, it's difficult to read a story without paragraphs and for more reasons than the fact that this basically looks like a giant word wall.

If it's a technical glitch, however, there's not much you can do though except host your story on another site or find out how to fix your fic on this one.

Good luck to you! Happy writing :D