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by Artemick

person Sekah
schedule November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH MY JESUS GOD EXTRA CHRIST.

*gasps for breath for a long, long while*

Come. I give my body willingly, we'll make love for this story.
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Your toy is gone. His toy is gone. Back to business." -- Best line ever!

That totally fit how I picture Sakyo acting were one of them to die. Not like it's a big deal to him, as long as he still has Toguro to work for him. Really nice job portraying a different side of capture Kurama. I've seen fearful and I've seen unbreakable, but this, this acceptance of Karasu (as a way of trickery, of course) was quite different, and quite nice. Also interesting that you had Karasu show a bit of honor towards the end. And Kurama showed him the same, in his own way, I believe. Nice job writing this!