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by TransientTemptation

person Raen
schedule May 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I more than anyone can understand the lack of imagination, or hell even drive... *whines* but it's so good... please... stop torturing me and update... with something...
person kayci147
schedule March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Plz add more! I realllllyyyyyyy wanna know about the twins. They had better be hieis lol
schedule January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this! And there are remarkably few grammatical errors! ^.^ I hope to some new posts in the near future!
person Anji
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have come back a few times to read this story and I gave to say that I love your writing style. You are detailed without being vulgar and your writing flows nicely. I hope you come back and update this story!
~Anji
schedule April 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful story. I am enjoying your portrayal of the characters. Other than the type-Os (which I can overlook) and extra words (which I know a spell check would never catch) you have a pretty sound style. I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.
person Dragon7
schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.        
person LakotaGirl
schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this story a great deal. Hiei/Kurama is one of my favorite pairings and I can't resist a good hurt/comfort story. How could people not write Hiei and Kurama as a couple after how Yu Yu Hakusho ends with Kurama teasing Hiei after he gives him the necklace (for his sister Yukina) and Kurama tells him he's a good friend but he never thought of him "that way"? Hilarious and mind tripping for all us yaoi fangirls who had been imagining them EXACTLY that way since they first entered the picture together.

I've read lots of MPreg (because it lends itself so well to H/C) and this one is excellent. It explains how the pregnancy is possible and how the baby will be born (so many leave those details out) while still having it make sense in the YYH universe.

I think your portrayal thus far of each of the characters stays true to their personalities from the series. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the excellent work.
schedule October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw. I really like this story. I'd really like to see more...? *hinthingnudgenudgecough*

So yeah... I'll keep an eye out.
person Dragon7
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This a intresting story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope the children he is carrying are Hei's.