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this is very good i hope you plan to do more

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Awww!!!! its adorible and i love the perspective on this one like focusing on hiei and kurama only mentioning the others as they're there (example: yusuke's spirit gun referance lol)... please write a sequel/chapter? i've missed your fics so much!!

(And threatning to feed Hiei to the plant was just awesome)

This story is adorable! I just finished chapter one, and I'm hooked. I was going to ask that you continue, but I see there is already a chapter two. I've been away from AFF for a looooong time, and I'm glad I found this one. Better late than never I guess.

I love your Hiei/Shiori interaction. I'm kind of a sucker for good Shiori involvement, and you certainly did not disappoint! I hope you develop this because you've set a wonderful base for a future Hiei/Kurama relationship with a generous helping of powermom-who-accepts-her-son-as-a-demon-and-Hiei-as-his-love-interest!Shiori. Keep up the awesome work!!!

Aww. That's such a bittersweet ending! It leaves so much writhing around in my imagination. I love how you had both of them reaching out to the other and both of them able to rely on Shiori. You've hit all the "awww" points in two little chapters. Well done.

In my humble opinion, I think just about anything you write is pure artistry. Seriously. I look forward to your next work, chapter, or whatever.

That was such a touching ending, thank you for continuing the story.

Aww you can't just leave it *there*!! Please just one more little eensy weensy chapter to wrap the story up? Please? I loved Shiori's mild freak out but then acceptance and thinking they were a couple, even suggesting they should be, and Hiei thinking he's not worthy. I can't wait to see the little mother-son "talk" and Kurama showing Hiei how worthy Kurama thinks he is! ^__^

Please, one chapter just to tie things up. I beg you.

You're back! i checked your profile on a whim only to find this adorible jem! i love how adorible Kurama was when calling for hiei throughout the entire thing :P SHiori had a mini freak out and i fully expect she'll scold Shuichi if you write more lol Hiei was so caring and you could tell how worried he was for his Fox!

A second chapter would be wonderful just to tie up that pickle and maybe get a nice lemon in there? please? Even if you dont write another chapter could you write more oneshots? i miss your style and how wonderful your plots come out

Here's hoping your RL gives you some free time!