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by JustAnotherPerson

person Jubbles
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Botam watching through the window, uhm, I wonder who else was jealous of her?...
person Lola
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
W-why the heck would anyone play that kind of prank on anyone?! I ... Well, pwp, I guess, haha. The smut was good though ;D
person ardentes
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. It is kind of humorous in the end but all the while very delicious! I really enjoyed it!
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this fic was so adorable it made my night i needed something to make me smile and this was it, thank you for posting it :3
as always koenma had to be the prankster :P however i think this prank worked out for the best, ne? lol
again enjoyed reading it and now i feel inspired to work on myne ty :D
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol~ Now that's a prank worth pulling. XD Nice~
person Cricket
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...... *snort* xDD That was hilairious. There better be another chapter to this. Wonder what prank they'll use to get him back.... :D
person kitkit
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it wasv very sexy...loved it
person geeclock
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious. Koenma’s been a bad boy, will he be punished? With whips and vines and whatever wicked flora Kurama can come up with. ^_^ This one so screams for a re-visitation.