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besides the uke yusuke lemon which i was repulsed by... there was gems here and there that i will always remember with this pair. the stroking of kurama's hair was really brilliant!it made me view their relationship in a realistic way. also, that first time kurama seduced yusuke in his room (right before kurama's mom interrupted) had me squealing in delight! i would really like to see their roles in reversed. i think it will be beautiful!

wow..everything up to the lemon wasfreaking perfect!!but i just can't imagine yusuke being bottom in a relationship... it will be very OOC and not very fitting of his character IMO.

I have to say that your stories of Kurama and Yusuke are the best I have ever read, and that is not flattery talking, but just plain truth. I like the way you portrayed their relationship as friends and as potential lovers. It was so moving and full of complex feelings that make the readers feel for them. At least on my part, I really loved them and the constant battle to find happiness with eachother.
I have read your other stories of this couple, "What I steal...I keep", "I care for you", and "As we lay", they all were brilliant. "As we lay" continues to be my favorite story of them and honestly its the story that introduced me to Kurama/Yusuke pairing, which was sad for other fics cause it set a standard and was hard for me to find a story that came close to being as great.  So imagine my delight when I found this story as well. I hope to read more of your work on this pairing in the future. Thanks for sharing your work.

AMAZING! your story telling is heartbreaking, poignant and sexy. my favorite was in chapter five when Yusuke lost his egg! somehow it reminded me of Berserk volume 14 after eclipse went down. Guts left Casca behind who's mind was shattered of her rape and had a miscarriage at the result. he abandon her for 2 years to get revenge. he left her alone with the trauma for 2 years and it reminded me when Kurama left Yusuke for a year and suffered his loss all alone same with Casca did.

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I really enjoyed this story. :) You did a great job! Can't wait to read more of your works.

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Lemony, Lemony, Lemony... I love you ! T_T I've been waiting forever, it seems, but it was so worth it!!! Its not often that Kurama is confused but doesn't he know how to fix his mistakes or what! If only more poeple cared about the people they love this much. Though he has had centuries to learn, :/ Still I love it and I love how Yusuke is actually trying to change , which is equally as important. Great chappy!

P.S. Kurama avenging those responsible for his Yus-chan's heartaches, EPIC!!!

I meant to review your stories before, but I was really tired C:> I love your style, it's very...eloquent? It's nothing if not tidy and I love it. You have a smooth approach to characters we all know and love and you represent them even better than the show. You give us all the nitty gritty details and I'm eating it up. I found your work a while back, quite a while back, and now that I've found it, you're once again one of my favorite authors, of which I can count on one hand. Keep up the great work! I love what you have to offer. C:

This is an intense and interesting story! I really like it and I wish you would write more!