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for Hikisaka

by zekesbabe

person NyteKit
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very nice start! I like you writing style and the personality you've given Youko. I can see this, him taunting his captor(s) even at what could be his end. Interested to see where this goes!
person ardentes
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I originally was not going to read this because I usually like to read pairings. I at first thought you would insert an author made character in the story but so far you have not. I found the first chapter intriguing. I wish you luck with the next chapter. I really am curious what angles you will pursue this from and I find myself really wondering where this will lead. I cannot wait to read where this story will go!