rate_review Reviews

lol cute in a bit of a strange way. I always hatted when people but babies into yaoi fics with two guy parents, but i guess since you didn't make kurama or hiei eat a magical plant to get them pregnant or something else i will forgive you. what a terror the little guy will be. hiei king of the demon world and he wants a marriage license. So cute. My favorite line though had to be hiei telling kurama to go weed himself. That nearly had me dying of laughter.

Hot scene!! I LOL on the sparring part. Please write more Kurama/Hiei!!! I love your writing, very talented!

Awww! Fox baby! *is sucker for foxes*
I liked this one just as much as all the others.
Though you really made me wanna watch the entire series.
And yay! Sequel to Dreamlands can't wait!! ^_^
This time my mouth shall stay closed. >< lol
Thanks for the story and hope you had a nice
Thanksgiving! <3

~Xiana a.k.a Liera

That was cute! Altho the making a baby out of clay and animating it was VERY different, it was kinda cool! This was one of the more interesting fics ive read in a long time! kudos!XD

*giggles* Kuwabara in a fuzzy cat costume and lots of yarn....pfffft

*fans self* The sex scene in the woods almost killed me, it was so hot. I love how you have them falling in love with each other but Kurama can't identify the expression on Hiei's face, and he doesn't even really get his own feelings. And what Kuwabara said at the end of the chapter made me laugh my ass off. Nice.

Also, you wrote about the Dark Tournament well. You didn't rehash the plot but added to it, fleshed it out. And I'm soooooo sad that Kurama broke up with Hiei after returning to his demon form for that fight but you're right - the breakup would have to be amicable because of the way they act for the rest of the series. And that would certainly explain Hiei's absence during the Sensui arc.

^.^ muh fav yuyu hakusho pairing >.< I like this story alot.
sorry I'm bad at giving reviews -.-;

I really really really really really love this story! I've always been a fan of an early-Kurama/Hiei relationship and I love Two Shots so this is perfect.

When Kurama was licking Hiei's wound and then started to kiss/lick him I was alhgslahlshla. And the entire scene where they admit they want each other was really well-written and hot, especially where Hiei made Kurama talk about his "fantasies" I love where you're going with this and I can't wait for more!

I am loving this story! I am a huge Hiei and Kurama fan. I can't wait for the next chapter. I like that you’re skimming through the series while adding it. It's not confusing and it's understandable why you are skimming. The series is long and theirs just too much info to add. So, good job!

I"m sad cause I never got to finish the manga *sorrow*
Or the anime series...*more sorrow*
But I did read those chapters and I saw most of the dark tourny.
You make me wanna watch/read the series! <3