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by Mikastarlight

schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yusuke, always thinking so little of himself. At least Kurama and Hiei are there~ shishi Anyways, I'm really enjoying this story and get excited every time I see you've posted a new chapter. XD The writing is clear and neat, and the story/plot is good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^.^
person Yacumo
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Very nice.
Let´s hope to have a little bit of action between the beautiful kitzune and Yusuke LOL.
person Tanuki
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Normally, I don't like fan fiction. Topless Robot: fan fiction Friday has kinda ruined them for me lol. but im realy enjoying your story. you do a wonderful job of keeping everyone in character and the story is believable. and i find myself always checking for a new update. i dnt really review things often so I'm simply going to say Good Job! :)
person kitkit
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wonderful..can't wait for the next chapter
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving this. Especially now that you added Hiei to the mix.

Although Yusuke still doesn't get the memo that demons are less heteronormative than humans...ah well..
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy! That was really good. I read all 5 chapters in one go and can't wait for more. You really build up the sexual tension quite nicely. Damn, that was hot!
person kitkit
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lucky yusuke.....he gets gifts from both kurama and hiei..and he gets taken out on a date AND hiei nearly kisses him...wow
person YACUMO
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NICE!!!
I hope to see a lot of all kinds of combinations in airings as possible!!!!!
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is so good. I love your story. Will it become a threesome or is it a triangle? Good job, I hope you update soon.
person YACUMO
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very very nice.
I would love is to see some action LOL.
Just one question, in your fic, is Yusuke the dominant? Or Kurama....because honestly I don not picture Kurama dominating Yusuke.
I have the picture of Yusuke....taking whatever he wants from beautiful Kurama though.

Anyways, good fic.