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by Mikastarlight

schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
DAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW Shiori is so nice. I love how she took Yusuke under her wing. The end of this chapter is all *sniffle*

And poor Kurama! He needs to just come out and be like: YUSUKE, I WANT YOUR ASS, SO THE NEXT TIME YOU MAKE OUT WITH ME IN THE MORNING I'M TAPPING IT, KAY? Hopefully Hiei will watch and then join in.

And since when is Hiei the voice of reason? He's the glue in this story, holding everyone's shit together. Nice. Hey, he's a smart guy when he isn't saying HOT.

NOW WRITE SOME SEX FOR THIS PLEASE. I NEED TO SEE KURAMA HAPPY AND FRESHLY MARKED.
person kitkit
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love it
person kitkit
schedule November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
luv it
person sara
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this story so much. And I really like the way you've been writing the characters. They all seem natural. can't wait for the next updates.
person kitkit
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow...yaahh hiei got some action...i can't wait to see if next time kurama will get some lovin
person YACUMO
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice part with Hiei there. I would have prefered more Yusuke/Kurama action though LOL. Cannot wait until he detective snaps.
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww Yusuke's freak out at the end of the chapter was - in a way - cute to me. He flips out and Kurama chases after him and he acts all emo and Kurama comforts him. Romantic. I love how Kurama seems to have this lin-in to him. Oh, and the wake up and make out scene was HOT. More please!

Now onto Hiei, who is "subtle as a jackhammer" ahjdlahshla HAHAHAHAHA. I love how he's all over Yusuke and being all Hiei. And you can't write anything without the OT3 slipping in there, can you? I understand, those boys are just too sexay.

You know I'm loving this Mika. LOVING IT.
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another fabulous chapter, I look forward to more. I was very pleased with the idea of both of them with Yusuke.
person Tesgura
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Yuuske. I can't wait to read more!
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more o.o i want to find out what happens next so more chapters please :D
oh...and you're doing a fine job...more chapters o.o''''