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for Carbon

by Mikastarlight

person kitkit
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooh its gettin hot..i can't wait for the next chapter
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love that Shiori is so accepting of her son's relationship. Also, can't wait until the sexings!
person Tesgura
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh Yuuske and Heie are going to have the smex! What's Kurama going to think/say about that? What if Shiori walks in on Heie and Yuuske? That would be hilarious! Can't wait to read more.
person Daze Kitshoney
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* such a mean cliffy! lol But Im lovein this story! Keep it up! ^^
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh you were so right that was mean lol!
But for the record...I love Hiei, I love the way you play all three of them
and this is getting very interesting. Thanks for the story.
person Sutioxxx
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THIS CHAPTER
THIS CHAPTER
THIS CHAPTER
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THAT HAIR PULLING
Oh and you used the word "glorious" which we talked about the other day. I smiled.
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ANYWAY
I THINK THERE NEEDS TO BE SOME DEMONSTRATIONS

FUCK YOU FOR LEAVING IT THERE
I WANT MORE
MORE.
person Tesgura
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Than goodness everything's out in the open now, at least between those three. Where do the boys go from here? Sex I hope!
person kitkit
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh happy happy joy joy...hiei and kurama and yusuke are a couple. lets just hope yusuke doesn't do anythin stupid to mess it up.
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know, for a second there I thought Yusuke was going to flip out at the table with Kurama family. Heh. AND IT'S SEX TIEMS NAO, YES? I'D PICK BOTH OF THEM TOO.

And: "Yusuke, Hiei and I are more likely to become lovers with each other rather than any other demon." BEST LINE EVAR. I APRROVE.

(Also, the last paragraph or so is all in italics, I think you have to fix the coding.)
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your Yusuke is as funny and awesome as ever. Though, as of this point, the background characters are making this for me. Especially Keiko and Shiori- I ADORE how you write them.