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for Carbon

by Mikastarlight

schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I still ADORE the way you write Kuwabara. It makes his appearances here in this fic all the more worthwhile.


“We’ve decided to call Shu-kun ‘Kokoda’ to alleviate confusion. It was his idea.”

Thanks, Mika, I spit out my water with this one.
person Tesgura
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw, so cute! It's so cute them all being in love, I can't wait to see Kurama assimilate. I'm sure it'll be awesome!
person Midnightsscream
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love that this relationship is working out so well. I thought it would be harder for the three to work something out, but it seems demon culture is helping them out quite a bit. I love that they work so well and that there are the human/demon differences. great job! :)
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm, updates make me happy~ XD Koenma, always so 'helpful'. lol Yay for Hiei helping Yusuke give a present for Kurama~~ And too much sex? There's such a thing?! haha, anyways~ As always, I enjoyed this chapter as well. I look forward to the next chapter and whatever else could possibly happen between our lovely trio. ^.^
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
trouble not at all dear :3 enjoying this side of the story and yusuke's transition into his new life sort to speak, and with hiei and kurama there to assist him what better way than to become lovers ;-D. cannot wait to read more and do continue to write this fic i am finding myself drawn to this site just to see of you have updated :D
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It was a good chapter. The sex scene between them was steaming. I like that I can see Yusuke slowly progressing/changing for the better. I hope to see more soon.
schedule December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Raizen taking over Yusuke mid-sex was AWESOME.

A nice AU twist on how that enters the picture.
person Brockman
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted you to know that out of all th stories Im reading on this site yours has captured my attention. I just wish you could write faster. But I love your thought process.
person IndieKidB.
schedule December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a fanfiction of pure epicness. I just read all fourteen chapters in one sitting and I can't wait for more! You are absolutely brilliant. I adore how you've developed Hiei's personality.
person kitty hatter
schedule December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story I want to see where it goes please email me the link when u update please!!