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by Mikastarlight

person kitkit
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it
person Tesgura
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Yuusuke graduated! So long looser teachers! I'm glad everything's working out, but how will Yuusuke and Hiei deal with Kurama's reluctance to admit his homosexuality? I don't see that problem going away any time soon. Can't wait to read more!
person Hemamal
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I can finally post without an error message showing up.

First off, in the beginning of the story, I found the chemistry between Yusuke and Kurama very enthralling. Their interactions are almost poetic in the simple actions being so filled with hidden feeling and the budding of a more intimate love.

When Hiei was added into the mix I was kind of thrown off for a second, even though they are my favorite threesome. I was afraid that Hiei's inclusion would interfere with the romance between Yusuke and Kurama. I am more than happy to find out that I was wrong! You added Hiei in seamlessly, in my opinion. Hiei also added a different dynamic that I wasn't expecting.I am very happy with the addition now.

All in all, great story so far and I am waiting eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

PS. I found the fact that Yusuke beat Kurama on a test hilarious!!! i could just imagine Kurama's expression perfectly. ^_^
person kitkit
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Congrats to Yusuke for graduating and getting accepted! XD I wonder if Hiei learned his lesson to not suddenly start something if he's not ready to take what he gets in return. shishishi Yusuke is so lucky to have them~ As always, a pleasure to read. ^.^
person Tesgura
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, that's so sweet of Kurama's mom! And I can't believe Yuusuke got a better score than Kurama! That is so awesome! And I'm really surprised Kurama didn't get him a car, but it makes sense to get a computer, as useful as they are for school. Can't wait for more!
person Q
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Typically, I don't review things, because I'm a lazy git. However, I''m making an exception for you: REad it all, loved it all, write more please? I congradulate you for keeping everyone believable, and for keeping my attention.
person kitkit
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wonderful..i luv it
person RugbyGod
schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! It flows incredibly well! Can't wait for more!
person ara
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, thanks for writing such a hot/cute story with my favorite pairing( um..threesome? lol)!