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K I just wanted to say that I have literally sought this story out several times and directed new readers to it several times because it is just that damn good. Bless.

Sorry about not reviewing before, I never noticed that no one reviewed. I thought the hits meant you had too many reviews for me to bother. I love your story mainly because its not just sex. Your show growth in the characters and while there isn't a strong plot outside of yusuke, Hiei and kurama's relationship( and dealing with new things) your story is amazing. I love the interactions between the characters and you definitely have a way of showing the true personalities( meaning the characters seem to be right not overly dramatized to make the story darker or anything). Thank you for providing a great story.

OMG NOOOOOOO!!! That can't be the end! I absolutely loved the problems you gave Yusuke. They were so realistic and they were things that people go through everyday in some way or another. Absolutely brilliant. Brilliant portrayal of the characters. Loved them! And now I'm depressed that it is completed...this was a read I simply couldn't look away from. I just couldn't wait to see what happened next. I really hope you write a sequel. It would be another awesome read I'm sure!! I mean a wedding for the boys! That could add all sorts of new chaos to things. Especially if somehow his mother or Raizen or even his birth father got involved!

Anyways, loved the story and really really really hope you go for a sequel!

Happy Writing!

Serenity Rayne

I love the story. I've read it almost half a dozen times by now. There's only one thing that makes me cringe. Sugar and/or milk is being placed in green tea. From my understanding putting extra stuff in tea is a Western thing. I have never gone to Japan, only to China and when there no one every asked if I wanted milk or sugar in my tea. I found a video of someone who had gone to Japan, asked for sugar in the green tea and gotten a interesting response.

The video: http://www.keepingpaceinjapan.com/2010/10/green-tea-with-sugar.html
You just need to watch the first 3 odd minutes to get the story.

I know it's a little thing. I'm nit picky by nature and I'm sorry if I offended you.

Awww, I wanted Yoko to come out and play!! But other than that I really love this story, and it will certainly be my top favorite for a long while.

nnnooo the story is over...i really enjoyed reading it

mmm, possessive Yusuke~ shishishi, I'm sure it can get really interesting. XD

When someone casts Flame on you, just remember you have an auto reflect shield. ^.~ Keep up the great work! I'm always waiting and wanting to read more. :)

I really like this so far and I hope you update soon!

love your story please keep it up

I love this story, I love the emotions from all parties and the wonderful collection of emotional and instinctual reactions. I feel as if I am experiencing each characters position from inside of them. Please continue to write, I hate the lulls in updates. I need completion. Love to see more.