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for That God-Awful Perfume

by geeclock

person ardentes
schedule January 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story but I also love the ending. It's hilarious and eludes to your other works. I liked how Yusuke was confused and even went so far as to drag Hiei around to find the perfect perfume for Keiko. The part about using perfumes for torture was hilarious, and I definitely can relate to that (most perfumes make me sneeze my head off). Anyway, I realized I never reviewed this story and I meant to. It's one of the stories I read when I can't find any new ones that sound interesting.
schedule February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO! I love this story!!!! It was soooo funny! Great Job!
schedule September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was surprisingly funny, IC, and good. I was expecting a Keiko-bashing fic from the beginning, but I was pleasantly surprised when she turned out to be a huge yaoi fangirl. (Hey, you and I agree on something, haha!)

Although Yusuke and Keiko's relationship has NOTHING on Sensui and Itsuki's in the dysfunction department, LOL.
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Gawd. I love this, I was laughing so hard to parts of it, and getting so hot and bothered by others, excellent piece of fanfiction, I am so looking forward to seeing what else you have. :) keep it up i'll be watching and waiting
schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know, your Yusuke/Hiei reminds me of Ryukotsusei's Yusuke/Hiei which is awesome because she's not writing anymore and I really missed this kind of stuff. Your Yusuke-Hiei banter is lovely and I really liked how Hiei was angsting in the field because Yusuke turned him down and Kurama came and comforted him. Nice.

I really enjoy your stories.
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bahaha. This was lovely. I enjoyed every moment of it. XD Tanks fer the awesome read! *waves her Yusuke/Hiei flag*
person ruthie balboa
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is the oddest way I've ever read for Hiei and Yusuke to become a couple, but I really enjoyed it. I thought it was very delicious. I like your writing and hope you post something else soon. Your stories are a joy to read!
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hahahaah sooo flipping cute!!! and really the idea came in walmart? what perfume where you smelling? anyways thanks for the update i loved it! and all its fuzzyness
kit
person WhiteCourtain
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nice story.I'm glad you pick Yusuke and Hiei, and it was good,that this story wasn't so fluffy, and didn't have so much act-scene(lol I'm used to your other stories).So it was simple, and awesome, good to read something like this in a while.:)
person Tesgura
schedule August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was so cute! Especially the shout outs about Gundam and Inu-Yasha fics. Great story, really hot. Loved it!