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for Unexpected Love

by yuyuhakusholover

person jrob
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed reading this i would very much like reading more.
person kit
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see that people are still writing some interesting YYH stories. :3 I usualy dont read about this pairing but it caught my attention and the way you lay out the story has kept me interested.
I like the perspective in which the story is told and how it flows. You also portray the characters pretty accurately. The only mistakes i've noticed are mispelled words but thats hardly noticeable since im more intersted in what is happening in the story. Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm curious to see how everything is gonna turn out.