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for Hiei's Harem - Pt. 18 - Ending

by 66Hiei08

schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi sorry for your cousin hope your family feels better soon.
person POHness1
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am SO sorry about your cousin. you go ahead and take as much time as you need. thats more important than this story. family comes first.
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THERE IS NO REASON TO SAY SORRY TO US...YOU TAKE ALL THE TIME YOU NEED...WE WILL STILL BE HERE WHEN YOUR READY...EGO sum sic rumex pro vestri perdo EGO mos servo vos quod vestri prosapia in meus preces.*I am so sorry for your lose I will keep you and your family in my prayers.*
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like Ninhan. And Hiei, as always. He's still great in your stories. And I'm so happy you're planning to continue Shura's Quest! So happy! Yay!
schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love seeing Hiei when his sheild are kind of down, the soft side of him. What is River up to recently though? I wonder what Yusuke and Kurama would think of Hiei's firstborn. I cant belive that you are getting to the end... :(
great chapters ~Kori
schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ut eram sic cute video vidi visum hiei cuddling suus filius quod puer est adorable. valde officium
{that was so cute to see hiei cuddling his son and the boy is adorable...great job}
schedule April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nyah.... I'm glad there was a bowl of ice cream in front of me while I was reading this.... So very sad.

Can't wait to see how it ends though! I've really enjoyed it, even if I didn't review all the time.
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! i can hardly see the screen to write for the tears.....that was so sad i can't believe she's gone poor hiei and the baby...atleast they got to say goodbye and spend time together before it happened....i mean she could have been alone at the shrine without him.....so sad *wipes tears from face* i wonder where they go fom here....and when is touya going to give brith?...Wonderful But Sad Job
person POHness1
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...sad...expected, but sad... *sigh* we knew it was gonna happen, but... anyway. still lovingly written though. bravo to you. and i KNOW we will see wodnerful things from Ninhan. you can tell. that boy is just too knowing. ^_^

plz continue.
person POHness1
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
such a beautiful and cruel beginning to an ending. poor Staci - if only she didnt have to die. *sigh* oh well. im kinda sad that this will be ending soon, since ive followed it for sooo long, but i know it wil be a spectacular ending!

so plz continue! ^_^