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for Hiei's Harem - PT. 17 - Breaking

by 66Hiei08

schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Slow? Are you kidding? I've been looking forward to the time when everybody is in the same place and is forced to come to terms with their issues or have plot-tastic confrontations! Don't you DARE skim through these for the sake of the pace! This is where all the psychological shit goes down! YA!

klv

PS: Sorry about the vehement tone of the review; I really enjoyed your update this time.
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
quiet disappointed, that Yusuke hasn't gotten to meet any of Hiei's kids. I was sure they would of wanted to taste him at least xD
I'm still here, keep going! The chaptes seem to be coming out slower? T_T
person POHness1
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
man! Yusuke is totally trying to get killed. does he know nothing about the territory of an alpha male?! sheesh. *sigh* i sympathize with you. and poor you. i hope the mare doesnt kill you.
im glad everyone accepts the situation, but i still wonder what is going to go on with the childrens.

plz continue ^_^
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sorry i haven't reviewed been in the hospital again i hate being ill....any way i love the chapters and can't wait to read more at least they brought one of the mares babies back^__^...great job
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey I luv this story please continue I've been readin it 4 the past 3 wks 2 catch up and I really like it. Keep going and remeber. The dark side has the best cookies!
person POHness1
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww, such sad times. so much is happening. *sigh* he was gonna go and get himself killed again, wasn't he? poor guy. so much to go through...
im glad yusuke and kurama understand the situation now... though wonder what will happen between them now.

plz continue.
schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow she has to lose one to survive...thats so sad.....but great chapters i can't wait for more....i always look forward to your updates.
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow 2 chapters of the new saga for me to read.......and so far i am really lovin it...great job.
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHH! So Yusuke finally knows everything, I guess thats a good thing, he seems to be taking it okay. Unlike Kurama, Is he going to try to take his kits from their mommies? I dont think the 'human' part of him would do that, I mean, look at how much he loved Shori. If any of the three of them understand the bond between mother and child it would be Kurama. But at the same time I cant see him leaving his kits in Hiei's care permanetly. Some sort of custody agreement perhaps??? Im sure that you already know whats going to happen you sly author you, do try to not leave us in the ark for too long hmm?
person POHness1
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...wow. i had no idea that Kurama would blow up like that. and in the first chapter, too. what is so important about Kuraama's babies being *finger quotes* "owned" by Hiei? is it anything that hiei giving the babies back wont cure? he hasnt marked any of them.

so nice of you to begin the first chapter with a drama. i know there is so much to come.

plz continue ^_^