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October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best karasu/kurama I have ever read. You portrayed karasu immensly well for the little personality/background information we get off him compared to the other villians. And the ancient mentality and demon-istic dating ritual hints were well designed- serious love for this! Keep it up!
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story
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March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is lovely! Quite an improvement. While the first version tended towards more spasmodic, rushed, and a bit fragmented scenes that kept the whole story from coming out, now it's nice and linear, and there's a balance to it I like. The writing itself has also been improved quite a bit, especially at the beginning, which makes it a more enjoyable read.
Very good work! I can't wait for more from you, particularly another chapter or two of Stepfather. I always have a bit of panicked fun reading your works, and, in terms of Consent, well, it's easy enough to seduce me with Karasu/Kurama. They're fun, aren't they?
Feel free to reply to this in an email, by the way. If you want to, and all of that.
Very good work! I can't wait for more from you, particularly another chapter or two of Stepfather. I always have a bit of panicked fun reading your works, and, in terms of Consent, well, it's easy enough to seduce me with Karasu/Kurama. They're fun, aren't they?
Feel free to reply to this in an email, by the way. If you want to, and all of that.