rate_review Reviews

I love this story! Its one of the best I've read in a long time. Keep up the Awesome work. Its got a good plot line and you protray the characters in a fairly good way for your story. Love it, can't wait to see more of it.

what Kurama is doing is horrible... he deserve no forgiveness..
not just breaking Hiei's heart.. but also using him after that
I want him dead for what he's doing to Hiei

Wow finally hiei fights back.... I hope it's a good one( the plan for revenge i mean)..... but will Hiei end up the bad guy here......just curious coz tat would suck...

man! i cant wait til the next chapter..hopefully there is one.. ill be looking out for it lol

Thank you for updating once more. You have me intrigued as to what Hiei's revenge plan is, I'm sure it will expose Kurama's true colors to the rest of the group.

When I read the first chapter, I was intrigued by your plot line and where you intended to take this story. However, I have to admit, I believe this story has entered the realm of the surreal. Kurama has become a total bastard, and for no apparent reason. There has been, up until now, no explanation as to why he is acting this way towards someone he supposedly loved (and if the story summary and that this is eventually to be H/K is to be believed, still loves). And Hiei, while stoic, has become a total wuss. Perhaps it's because he loves the fox, but even if this is the case, I don't believe he'd stand by and let Kurama treat him like a doormat.

I plan to keep reading, and hope the story will turn around soon.

Intense is certainly a word that could be used to describe this chapter. Thank you for updating once more, please do so again when you have the chance, you did an excellent job!

Kurama's such a jerk. I'd beat him up... ><

But, I like the story, and I can't wait to see more!

hey its a really good story! sorry that i didnt review last time.. didnt know how it effected people..ill start reviewing this story from now on!! lol plus dont worry about ppl reviewing do it for the ones who are reading it and reviewing! good luck!

im a kurama lover but damn this is hardcore shit! i feel sorry for hiei..hope the next chapters is just as interesting as the last ones! i cant wait til the next ones is out!

The story is one of the most interesting pieces i'v read so far. Though i'm a Hiei girl through and through so some parts of it rub me the wrong way.... keep up the awesome work.