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WOW This is astounding 0__o I cant wait for the next chapter

Hey um yea so like i kno its been like some MONTHS since u last updated but i was just wondering if u was gone like ever update again or complete the story cuz like i really like enjoyed im kuramas an asshole but hey its totally my in my top 5 fav storys and it like ideas keep popping in my head like whats gona happen next u kno lol so yea email if ya ever get this u kno :)

more please!

keep it up

Awww i just read this and i really like it. Please continue!!

Why don't you update this???? I want to know what happens! (Please?) ;_;

Damn. Kurama is such a bitch in this story!

..I love it.

Dont stop writing, people are lazy and most dont review. Trust me plenty of people are reading, your fic is understandable and well written.

So, Kurama is quite again the villain here... (oh by the way... i went to check on your profile and was pleasantly surprise that you were also the author of Kurama's mistake... umm actually, i've been waiting for your update on that...) i also notice that you "almost" follow the same storyline with that of Kurama's Mistake... i mean you know Kurama hurting Hiei, marrying a ningen woman (for Inari's sake i really, really honestly doubt it), Hiei training to be super strong and plotting a bloody revenge for Kurama... heheh... i honestly believe that Kurama's not that bad... i mean... yes he was once the Youko (but both in manga and anime and in the movies, even the Youko is not that bad) more so since he became Shuichi Minamino (and Shuichi Minamino has never been attracted to any human girl or boy for that manner -- Maya is really nothing more than a classmate she saved from an enemy-- and she's quite annoying to be honest--- i mean she was captured because of her stubbornness and "minding others business" and so Kurama was left with no choice but to saved her ass)... and Hiei is...umm.... a little out of character again... not that i mind... it's still not that annoying but i still want you to know though... in case you were not aware of it

Please write more! I want to know what happens! Will Hiei kill Kurama, will Chiyoko die, is Kurama really that heartless? You made it sound like Kurama apologizes to Hiei in your description, so I wonder if you have new plans for it. Please update soon!!!